[deployment-guide: 170/185] Yum: mk changes for docs qa in 683492

[Jaromir Hradilek]

commit 953ac9bde219bea96d328ebb29009cfcca16e465
Author: Douglas Silas <dhensley at redhat.com>
Date:   Fri Apr 29 01:40:54 2011 +0200

    Yum: mk changes for docs qa in 683492

 en-US/Yum.xml |    8 ++++----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Yum.xml b/en-US/Yum.xml
index 5d6ff08..02eadc1 100644
--- a/en-US/Yum.xml
+++ b/en-US/Yum.xml
@@ -671,7 +671,7 @@ Done</screen>
 ~]# <command>yum groupremove kde-desktop</command>
 ~]# <command>yum remove @kde-desktop</command></screen>
       <important id="important-Package_Group_Removal">
-        <title>Package group removal</title>
+        <title>Intelligent package group removal</title>
         <indexterm>
           <primary>packages</primary>
           <secondary>removing package groups with Yum</secondary>
@@ -969,7 +969,7 @@ installonly_limit=3
 name=A Repository Name
 baseurl=http://path/to/repo or ftp://path/to/repo or file:///path/to/local/repo</screen>
       <para>
-        Every <literal>[<replaceable>repository</replaceable>]</literal> section must contain the following minimum options:
+        Every <literal>[<replaceable>repository</replaceable>]</literal> section must contain the following minimum directives:
       </para>
       <variablelist>
         <varlistentry>
@@ -1045,7 +1045,7 @@ baseurl=http://path/to/repo or ftp://path/to/repo or file:///path/to/local/repo<
         Many more <literal>[<replaceable>repository</replaceable>]</literal> options exist. Refer to the <literal>[repository] OPTIONS</literal> section of <command>man yum.conf</command> for the exhaustive list and descriptions for each.
       </para>
       <example id="ex-Setting_repository_Options">
-        <title>A sample <filename>/etc/yum.repos.d/redhat.repo</filename> file</title>
+        <title>A sample /etc/yum.repos.d/redhat.repo file</title>
         <programlisting># cat /etc/yum.repos.d/redhat.repo
 #
 # Red Hat Repositories
@@ -1354,7 +1354,7 @@ whitelists=/lib/modules/kabi
               The <application>presto</application> plugin adds support to <application>Yum</application> for downloading <firstterm>delta RPM</firstterm> packages, during updates, from repositories which have <application>presto</application> metadata enabled. Delta RPMs contain only the differences between the version of the package installed on the client requesting the RPM package and the updated version in the repository.
             </para>
             <para>
-              Downloading a delta RPM is much quicker than downloading the entire updated package, and can speed up updates considerably. Once the delta RPMs are downloaded, they must be rebuilt to apply the difference to the currently-installed package and thus create the fully updated package. This process takes CPU time on the installing machine. Using delta RPMs is therefore a tradeoff between time-to-download, which depends on the network connection, and time-to-rebuild, which is CPU-bound. Using the <application>presto</application> plugin is recommended for fast machines and systems with slower network connections, while slower machines on very fast connections <emphasis>may</emphasis> benefit more from downloading normal RPM packages, that is, by disabling <application>presto</application>.
+              Downloading a delta RPM is much quicker than downloading the entire updated package, and can speed up updates considerably. Once the delta RPMs are downloaded, they must be rebuilt to apply the difference to the currently-installed package and thus create the full, updated package. This process takes CPU time on the installing machine. Using delta RPMs is therefore a tradeoff between time-to-download, which depends on the network connection, and time-to-rebuild, which is CPU-bound. Using the <application>presto</application> plugin is recommended for fast machines and systems with slower network connections, while slower machines on very fast connections <emphasis>may</emphasis> benefit more from downloading normal RPM packages, that is, by disabling <application>presto</application>.
             </para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>