[system-administrators-guide/16: 2/4] Temporarily commented out certain portions of the book.

Jaromir Hradilek jhradile at fedoraproject.org
Tue Nov 8 01:43:42 UTC 2011


commit 63f1d7a1e7589802ed0ce6927e4ef8832157c349
Author: Jaromir Hradilek <jhradile at redhat.com>
Date:   Tue Nov 8 00:47:55 2011 +0100

    Temporarily commented out certain portions of the book.

 en-US/Preface.xml                     |    4 +++-
 en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml |    8 ++++++--
 en-US/The_X_Window_System.xml         |    5 +++--
 3 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Preface.xml b/en-US/Preface.xml
index 19c42d8..7392ed0 100644
--- a/en-US/Preface.xml
+++ b/en-US/Preface.xml
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        Gathering information about your system, including obtaining user-space crash data with the <application>Automatic Bug Reporting Tool</application>, and kernel-space crash data with <systemitem class="service">kdump</systemitem>
+        Gathering information about your system, including obtaining <!-- user-space crash data with the <application>Automatic Bug Reporting Tool</application>, and -->kernel-space crash data with <systemitem class="service">kdump</systemitem>
       </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
@@ -153,9 +153,11 @@
           <para>
             <xref linkend="ch-Automating_System_Tasks" /> provides an overview of the <command>cron</command>, <command>at</command>, and <command>batch</command> utilities. Read this chapter to learn how to use these utilities to perform automated tasks.
           </para>
+          <!-- TODO: Uncomment this as soon as the ABRT chapter is ready.
           <para>
             <xref linkend="ch-abrt" /> concentrates on <application>ABRT</application>, a system service and a set of tools to collect crash data and send a report to the relevant issue tracker. Read this chapter to learn how to use <application>ABRT</application> on your system.
           </para>
+          -->
           <para>
             <xref linkend="ch-OProfile" /> covers <application>OProfile</application>, a low overhead, system-wide performance monitoring tool. Read this chapter for information how to use <application>OProfile</application> on your system.
           </para>
diff --git a/en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml b/en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml
index 45ac172..7033786 100644
--- a/en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml
+++ b/en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml
@@ -36,7 +36,9 @@
         This part describes how to configure the network on &MAJOROS;.
       </para>
     </partintro>
-    <!-- <xi:include href="NetworkManager.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
+    <!-- TODO: Uncomment this as soon as the NetworkManager chapter is ready.
+    <xi:include href="NetworkManager.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+    -->
     <xi:include href="Network_Interfaces.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
   </part>
   <part id="part-Infrastructure_Services">
@@ -68,13 +70,15 @@
     <title>Monitoring and Automation</title>
     <partintro>
       <para>
-        This part describes various tools that allow system administrators to monitor system performance, automate system tasks, and report bugs.
+        This part describes various tools that allow system administrators to monitor system performance and automate system tasks<!--, and report bugs-->.
       </para>
     </partintro>
     <xi:include href="System_Monitoring_Tools.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
     <xi:include href="Viewing_and_Managing_Log_Files.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
     <xi:include href="Automating_System_Tasks.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+    <!-- TODO: Uncomment this as soon as the ABRT chapter is ready.
     <xi:include href="Automatic_Bug_Reporting_Tool_ABRT.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+    -->
     <xi:include href="OProfile.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
   </part>
   <part id="part-Kernel_Module_and_Driver_Configuration">
diff --git a/en-US/The_X_Window_System.xml b/en-US/The_X_Window_System.xml
index 9d4760f..601a256 100644
--- a/en-US/The_X_Window_System.xml
+++ b/en-US/The_X_Window_System.xml
@@ -1057,6 +1057,7 @@ EndSection</screen>
 
   </section>
 
+  <!-- TODO: Update this to take systemd into account.
   <section id="s1-x-runlevels">
 
     <title>Runlevels and X</title>
@@ -1069,12 +1070,11 @@ EndSection</screen>
 
     <para>In most cases, the &MAJOROS; installer configures a machine to boot into a graphical login environment, known as <firstterm>runlevel 5</firstterm>. It is possible, however, to boot into a text-only multi-user mode called <firstterm>runlevel 3</firstterm> and begin an X session from there.</para>
 
-    <para>The following subsections review how X starts up in both runlevel 3 and runlevel 5. <!-- For more information about runlevels, refer to <xref linkend="s1-services-runlevels"/>. --></para>
+    <para>The following subsections review how X starts up in both runlevel 3 and runlevel 5. For more information about runlevels, refer to <xref linkend="s1-services-runlevels"/>.</para>
 
     <section id="s2-x-runlevels-3">
 
       <title>Runlevel 3</title>
-      <!-- anything to update here? -->
 
       <indexterm
         significance="normal">
@@ -1248,6 +1248,7 @@ EndSection</screen>
 
     </section>
   </section>
+  -->
 
   <section id="s1-x-additional-resources">
 


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