[release-notes] Better prose on systemd database handling - BZ#743614

[John J. McDonough]

commit 65254e8cd1ad1f35235669f3e943b2277d7c6788
Author: John J. McDonough <jjmcd at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Tue Oct 11 11:11:36 2011 -0400

    Better prose on systemd database handling - BZ#743614

 en-US/Database_Servers.xml |    2 +-
 en-US/Revision_History.xml |    2 ++
 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Database_Servers.xml b/en-US/Database_Servers.xml
index afc1bd2..3724dc8 100644
--- a/en-US/Database_Servers.xml
+++ b/en-US/Database_Servers.xml
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
     </indexterm>
     
     <para>
-      MySQL and PostgreSQL have been updated to use native <package>systemd</package> unit files for startup, in place of the SysV-style init scripts.  This should eliminate various unfortunate problems that occurred in Fedora 15 due to <package>systemd</package>'s rather poor handling of SysV scripts.  Also, handling of cases where the database server is slow to start up is significantly better than it ever was in the SysV scripts, since in <package>systemd</package> there is no reason not to wait until the server is really ready. 
+      MySQL and PostgreSQL have been updated to use native <package>systemd</package> unit files for startup, in place of the SysV-style init scripts.  This should eliminate various unfortunate problems that occurred in Fedora 15 due to <package>systemd</package>'s rather poor handling of SysV scripts.  Also, handling of cases where the database server is slow to start up is significantly better than it ever was in the SysV scripts, since <package>systemd</package> can just wait until the server is really ready without slowing the boot down.
     </para>
   </section>
   <section>
diff --git a/en-US/Revision_History.xml b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
index f8b2572..d63eebb 100644
--- a/en-US/Revision_History.xml
+++ b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
@@ -18,6 +18,8 @@
 	<revdescription>
 	  <simplelist>
 	    <member>Various typos - BZ#741975</member>
+	    <member>Better prose on systemd database handling -
+	    BZ#743614</member>
 	  </simplelist>
 	</revdescription>
       </revision>