[deployment-guide] Updated the "Acknowledgments" section.

Jaromir Hradilek jhradile at fedoraproject.org
Fri Oct 14 14:12:08 UTC 2011


commit a57547b43c16d0af97f0f77bdbb30aa763fe7bb3
Author: Jaromir Hradilek <jhradile at redhat.com>
Date:   Fri Oct 14 15:53:32 2011 +0200

    Updated the "Acknowledgments" section.

 en-US/Preface.xml |    7 +++++--
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Preface.xml b/en-US/Preface.xml
index 3a762ff..43d4637 100644
--- a/en-US/Preface.xml
+++ b/en-US/Preface.xml
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
   <section id="sect-Preface-Target_Audience">
     <title>Target Audience</title>
     <para>
-      The <citetitle pubwork="book">Deployment Guide</citetitle> assumes you have a basic understanding of the &MAJOROS; operating system. If you need help with the installation of this system, refer to the <citetitle pubwork="book">&MAJOROSVER; Installation Guide</citetitle>.
+      The <citetitle pubwork="book">Deployment Guide</citetitle> assumes you have a basic understanding of the &MAJOROS; operating system. If you need help with the installation of this system, refer to the <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora/16/html/Installation_Guide/index.html">&MAJOROSVER; Installation Guide</ulink>.
     </para>
   </section>
   <section id="sect-Preface-Book_Organization">
@@ -224,7 +224,10 @@
       Certain portions of this text first appeared in the <citetitle>Deployment Guide</citetitle>, copyright &copy; 2007 Red Hat, Inc., available at <ulink url="http://docs.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5/html/Deployment_Guide/index.html" />.
     </para>
     <para>
-      The authors of this book would like to thank the following people for their valuable contributions: Adam Tkáč, Andrew Fitzsimon, Andrius Benokraitis, Brian Cleary Edward Bailey, Garrett LeSage, Jeffrey Fearn, Joe Orton, Joshua Wulf, KarstenWade, Lucy Ringland, Marcela Mašláňová, Mark Johnson, Michael Behm, Michael Behm, Miroslav Lichvár, Radek Vokál, Rahul Kavalapara, Rahul Sundaram, Sandra Moore, Zbyšek Mráz and Jan Včelák, among many others.
+      <xref linkend="sect-System_Monitoring_Tools-Net-SNMP" /> is based on an article written by Michael Solberg.
+    </para>
+    <para>
+      The authors of this book would like to thank the following people for their valuable contributions: Adam Tkáč, Andrew Fitzsimon, Andrius Benokraitis, Brian Cleary Edward Bailey, Garrett LeSage, Jeffrey Fearn, Joe Orton, Joshua Wulf, Karsten Wade, Lucy Ringland, Marcela Mašláňová, Mark Johnson, Michael Behm, Miroslav Lichvár, Radek Vokál, Rahul Kavalapara, Rahul Sundaram, Sandra Moore, Zbyšek Mráz, Jan Včelák, Peter Hutterer and James Antill, among many others.
     </para>
   </section>
 </preface>


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