[deployment-guide/comm-rel-16: 12/14] Updated the "Using the User Accounts Tool" section.

Jaromir Hradilek jhradile at fedoraproject.org
Tue Oct 18 11:02:10 UTC 2011


commit db99f91af8a489fe62a8329e4143b8a05375763e
Author: Jaromir Hradilek <jhradile at redhat.com>
Date:   Mon Oct 17 23:38:39 2011 +0200

    Updated the "Using the User Accounts Tool" section.

 en-US/Managing_Users_and_Groups.xml   |   25 +++++++++++--------------
 en-US/images/user-accounts-create.png |  Bin 18774 -> 18575 bytes
 en-US/images/user-accounts-remove.png |  Bin 25349 -> 20769 bytes
 en-US/images/user-accounts.png        |  Bin 94029 -> 27858 bytes
 4 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Managing_Users_and_Groups.xml b/en-US/Managing_Users_and_Groups.xml
index 2511f5d..5616538 100644
--- a/en-US/Managing_Users_and_Groups.xml
+++ b/en-US/Managing_Users_and_Groups.xml
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@
       <see>user configuration</see>
     </indexterm>
     <para>
-      The <application>User Accounts</application> configuration tool allows you to view, modify, add, and delete local users. To run the utility, either select <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guisubmenu>System Tools</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>System Settings</guimenuitem></menuchoice> from the <guimenu>Activities</guimenu> menu and click the <guimenu>User Accounts</guimenu> icon, or click your name on the panel and choose <guimenuitem>My Account</guimenuitem> from the drop-down menu.
+      The <application>User Accounts</application> configuration tool allows you to view, modify, add, and delete local users. To run the tool, select <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guisubmenu>System Tools</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>System Settings</guimenuitem></menuchoice> from the <guimenu>Activities</guimenu> menu and click the <guimenu>User Accounts</guimenu> icon.
     </para>
     <figure id="fig-Managing_Users_and_Groups-User_Accounts">
       <title>The User Accounts configuration tool</title>
@@ -154,27 +154,24 @@
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
     <para>
-      The main window of the <application>User Accounts</application> configuration tool is divided into two parts: The left side of the window contains a list of available user accounts. The right side provides details on a particular account.
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      By default, the tool only allows you to change certain settings regarding your account. This is because only <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> is allowed to configure users and groups. To unlock the configuration tool for all kinds of changes, click the <guibutton>Unlock</guibutton> button in the bottom-left corner of the window, and provide the root password when prompted.
+      By default, the tool only allows you to change certain settings regarding your account. This is because only the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user is allowed to configure users and groups. To unlock the configuration tool for all kinds of changes, click the <guibutton>Unlock</guibutton> button in the top-right corner of the window, and provide the correct password when prompted.
     </para>
     <section id="sect-Managing_Users_and_Groups-User_Accounts-Configuring_an_Account">
       <title>Configuring an Account</title>
       <para>
-        To change the image associated with an account, click the icon next to the account name and either select a picture from the drop-down list, or click <guimenuitem>Browse for more pictures...</guimenuitem> to use an image from your local drive.
+        To change the image associated with an account, click the icon next to the account name and either select a picture from the pulldown list, or click <guimenuitem>Browse for more pictures...</guimenuitem> to use an image from your local drive.
       </para>
       <para>
         To change the name associated with an account, click the name next to the icon to edit it.
       </para>
       <para>
-        To change the account type, use the <guimenu>Account type</guimenu> drop-down list. However, this change requires the configuration tool to be unlocked even if it is your account.
+        To change the account type, click the text next to the <guimenu>Account type</guimenu> label. Note that this change requires the configuration tool to be unlocked even if you are changing your own account.
       </para>
       <para>
-        To change the default language for an account, click the button next to the <guilabel>Language</guilabel> label, and select the desired language from the list.
+        To change the default language for an account, click the text next to the <guilabel>Language</guilabel> label and select a language from the list.
       </para>
       <para>
-        To change the password, click the button next to the <guilabel>Password</guilabel> label. A dialog box will appear, allowing you to set the new password. Note that the current password must be provided in order to confirm the change. Once done, click the <guibutton>Change</guibutton> button to save the change.
+        To change the password, click the field next to the <guilabel>Password</guilabel> label. A dialog box appears, allowing you to set the new password. Note that the current password must be provided in order to confirm the change. Once done, click the <guibutton>Change</guibutton> button to save the change.
       </para>
       <figure id="fig-Managing_Users_and_Groups-User_Accounts-Changing_Password">
         <title>Changing the password</title>
@@ -206,7 +203,7 @@
         <secondary>adding users</secondary>
       </indexterm>
       <para>
-        To add a new user, make sure the configuration tool is unlocked, and click the <guibutton>+</guibutton> button (that is, the plus sign) below the account list. A dialog box as shown in <xref linkend="fig-Managing_Users_and_Groups-User_Accounts-Adding_an_Account" /> will appear.
+        To add a new user, make sure the configuration tool is unlocked, and click the <guibutton>+</guibutton> button (that is, the plus sign) below the account list. A dialog window appears, allowing you to supply user details.
       </para>
       <figure id="fig-Managing_Users_and_Groups-User_Accounts-Adding_an_Account">
         <title>Creating a new account</title>
@@ -222,12 +219,12 @@
         </mediaobject>
       </figure>
       <para>
-        Take the followign steps to create an account:
+        Take the following steps to create an account:
       </para>
       <procedure>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Select an account type from the <guimenu>Account type</guimenu> drop-down list. Available account types are <option>Administrator</option> and <option>Standard</option> (the default option).
+            Select an account type from the <guimenu>Account type</guimenu> pulldown list. Available account types are <option>Administrator</option> and <option>Standard</option> (the default option).
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
@@ -237,7 +234,7 @@
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Either select a suggested username from the <guilabel>Username</guilabel> drop-down list, or fill in the corresponding input field.
+            Either select a suggested username from the <guilabel>Username</guilabel> pulldown list, or fill in the corresponding input field.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
@@ -260,7 +257,7 @@
         <secondary>removing users</secondary>
       </indexterm>
       <para>
-        To remove a user, make sure the configuration tool is unlocked, select the desired account from the account list, and click the <guibutton>&#8722;</guibutton> button (that is, the minus sign) below the account list. A dialog box as shown in <xref linkend="fig-Managing_Users_and_Groups-User_Accounts-Removing_an_Account" /> will appear.
+        To remove a user, make sure the configuration tool is unlocked, select the desired account from the account list, and click the <guibutton>&#8722;</guibutton> button (that is, the minus sign) below the account list. A dialog window appears, allowing you to confirm or cancel the change.
       </para>
       <figure id="fig-Managing_Users_and_Groups-User_Accounts-Removing_an_Account">
         <title>Removing an account</title>
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