[documentation-guide] added copy to sect-documentation_guide-style-be_professional
Pete Travis
immanetize at fedoraproject.org
Tue Oct 25 15:51:12 UTC 2011
commit cbcb5a4de198c2ede53aab56d3b8b1811ec42f59
Author: Pete Travis <me at petetravis.com>
Date: Tue Oct 25 00:05:08 2011 -0600
added copy to sect-documentation_guide-style-be_professional
en-US/style.xml | 4 +++-
1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/style.xml b/en-US/style.xml
index c6fd39f..0f25557 100644
--- a/en-US/style.xml
+++ b/en-US/style.xml
@@ -42,7 +42,9 @@
<section id="sect-documentation_guide-style-stay_in_scope">
<title>Stay in Scope</title>
<para>
- Make the flow of information easy to follow from point to point. If you need to sidetrack, link.
+ Your tips should adequately cover a stock installation of Fedora, in the present version.
+ Consider a separate section or referring to another document if elaboration is required.
+ Excessive asides will dilute the value of your work and create redundancies.
</para>
</section>
<section id="sect-documentation_guide-style-proofread">
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