[documentation-guide] added copy to sect-documentation_guide-style-be_professional

Pete Travis immanetize at fedoraproject.org
Tue Oct 25 15:51:12 UTC 2011


commit cbcb5a4de198c2ede53aab56d3b8b1811ec42f59
Author: Pete Travis <me at petetravis.com>
Date:   Tue Oct 25 00:05:08 2011 -0600

    added copy to sect-documentation_guide-style-be_professional

 en-US/style.xml |    4 +++-
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/style.xml b/en-US/style.xml
index c6fd39f..0f25557 100644
--- a/en-US/style.xml
+++ b/en-US/style.xml
@@ -42,7 +42,9 @@
 	<section id="sect-documentation_guide-style-stay_in_scope">
 		<title>Stay in Scope</title>
 			<para>
-				Make the flow of information easy to follow from point to point. If you need to sidetrack, link.
+				Your tips should adequately cover a stock installation of Fedora, in the present version. 
+				Consider a separate section or referring to another document if elaboration is required.  
+				Excessive asides will dilute the value of your work and create redundancies.
 			</para>
 	</section>
 	<section id="sect-documentation_guide-style-proofread">


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