[user-guide] Fix tagging to make this valid DocBook.

Jared Smith jsmith at fedoraproject.org
Fri Sep 9 05:19:13 UTC 2011


commit 5dc68071350b152c7740ce30451bf0c615dc5190
Author: Jared K. Smith <jsmith at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Fri Sep 9 01:18:18 2011 -0400

    Fix tagging to make this valid DocBook.
    
    The biggest problems were missing closing section tags and misuses of the <menuchoice> tag.

 en-US/Communications.xml             |    8 ++++----
 en-US/Connecting_to_the_Internet.xml |    2 +-
 en-US/Financial_software.xml         |    4 ++--
 en-US/Managing_software.xml          |    6 +++---
 en-US/Media.xml                      |    6 +++---
 en-US/Office_tools.xml               |    4 ++--
 en-US/Playing_games.xml              |    2 +-
 en-US/Playing_multimedia.xml         |    5 +++--
 en-US/Sharing_your_desktop.xml       |    6 +++---
 en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml  |   12 ++++++------
 10 files changed, 28 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Communications.xml b/en-US/Communications.xml
index 77cc52d..d43a723 100644
--- a/en-US/Communications.xml
+++ b/en-US/Communications.xml
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ You can find add-ons for Thunderbird at: <ulink url="https://addons.mozilla.org/
 						<itemizedlist>
 							<listitem>
 								<para>
-									in GNOME, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Thunderbird</application> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>Internet</guilabel></menuchoice>.
+									in GNOME, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Thunderbird</application> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Internet</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
 								</para>
 							</listitem>
 							<listitem>
@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@ In addition to <guilabel>Reply</guilabel>, <guilabel>Reply All</guilabel>, <guil
 						<itemizedlist>
 							<listitem>
 								<para>
-									in GNOME, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Claws Mail</application> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>Internet</guilabel></menuchoice>.
+									in GNOME, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Claws Mail</application> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Internet</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
 								</para>
 							</listitem>
 							<listitem>
@@ -685,7 +685,7 @@ The <menuchoice><guimenu>Help</guimenu></menuchoice> menu provides access to the
 		<section id="sect-User_Guide-Empathy-Configuring_Empathy">
 			<title>Configuring Empathy</title>
 			<para>
-				To start and configure <application>Empathy</application> in GNOME, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Empathy</application> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>Internet</guilabel></menuchoice>. In KDE, click on the <menuchoice><guimenu>Kickoff Application Launcher</guimenu><guisubmenu>Applications</guisubmenu><guisubmenu>Internet</guisubmenu><guisubmenu>IM Client</guisubmenu></menuchoice> menu entry for <application>Empathy</application>.
+				To start and configure <application>Empathy</application> in GNOME, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Empathy</application> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Internet</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. In KDE, click on the <menuchoice><guimenu>Kickoff Application Launcher</guimenu><guisubmenu>Applications</guisubmenu><guisubmenu>Internet</guisubmenu><guisubmenu>IM Client</guisubmenu></menuchoice> menu entry for <application>Empathy</application>.
 			</para>
 			<para>
 				Starting <application>Empathy</application> for the first time goes directly into the <guilabel>Messaging and VoIP Accounts Assistant</guilabel> dialog. Choose to configure <application>Empathy</application> to use an existing account, create a new account, or see people online nearby. 
@@ -750,7 +750,7 @@ If you want to temporarily disable an account, select <menuchoice><guimenu>Edit<
 	<section id="sect-User_Guide-Pidgin-Configuring_Pidgin">
 		<title>Configuring Pidgin</title>
 		<para>
-			To start and configure <application>Pidgin</application> in GNOME, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Pidgin</application> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>Internet</guilabel></menuchoice>. In KDE, click on the <menuchoice><guimenu>Kickoff Application Launcher</guimenu><guisubmenu>Applications</guisubmenu><guisubmenu>Internet</guisubmenu><guisubmenu>Instant Messenger</guisubmenu></menuchoice> menu entry for <application>Pidgin</application>.
+			To start and configure <application>Pidgin</application> in GNOME, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Pidgin</application> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Internet</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. In KDE, click on the <menuchoice><guimenu>Kickoff Application Launcher</guimenu><guisubmenu>Applications</guisubmenu><guisubmenu>Internet</guisubmenu><guisubmenu>Instant Messenger</guisubmenu></menuchoice> menu entry for <application>Pidgin</application>.
 		</para>
 		<!--                                                                                                   [[Image:Docs_Drafts_DesktopUserGuide_Communications_Gaim_accounts_2.png|300px|thumb|right|The '''Add Account''' dialog in Pidgin.]]                                                                                                   -->
 		<para>
diff --git a/en-US/Connecting_to_the_Internet.xml b/en-US/Connecting_to_the_Internet.xml
index 677e301..5ef6996 100644
--- a/en-US/Connecting_to_the_Internet.xml
+++ b/en-US/Connecting_to_the_Internet.xml
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
 				</listitem>
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						The final section allows you to access more advanced configuration options by clicking on <menulabel><guilabel>Network Settings</guilabel></menulabel>.
+						The final section allows you to access more advanced configuration options by clicking on <menuchoice><guilabel>Network Settings</guilabel></menuchoice>.
 					</para>
 				</listitem>
 			</itemizedlist>
diff --git a/en-US/Financial_software.xml b/en-US/Financial_software.xml
index 46406b8..6a1c386 100644
--- a/en-US/Financial_software.xml
+++ b/en-US/Financial_software.xml
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
 				<orderedlist>
 					<listitem>
 						<para>
-							To start <application>GnuCash</application>, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Gnucash</application> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>Office</guilabel></menuchoice>. Click the <guilabel>Close</guilabel> button to close the <guilabel>Tip of the Day</guilabel> window.
+							To start <application>GnuCash</application>, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Gnucash</application> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Office</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. Click the <guilabel>Close</guilabel> button to close the <guilabel>Tip of the Day</guilabel> window.
 						</para>
 					</listitem>
 					<listitem>
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@
 		<section id="sect-User_Guide-GnuCash-Using_GnuCash">
 			<title>Using GnuCash</title>
 			<para>
-				To open <application>GnuCash</application>,  go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>GnuCash</application> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>Office</guilabel></menuchoice>. The <guilabel>Accounts</guilabel> tab opens.
+				To open <application>GnuCash</application>,  go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>GnuCash</application> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Office</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. The <guilabel>Accounts</guilabel> tab opens.
 			</para>
 			<para>
 				The top menu bar allows you to manipulate your accounts. You can: 
diff --git a/en-US/Managing_software.xml b/en-US/Managing_software.xml
index 07cd0e2..a4d986c 100644
--- a/en-US/Managing_software.xml
+++ b/en-US/Managing_software.xml
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 			Fedora &PRODVER; uses a program called <application>PackageKit</application> to assist the user with installing and removing software. Any application from the Fedora repositories, including the ones described in this user guide, can be installed with the following method. 
 		</para>
 		<para>
-			To start <application>PackageKit</application> in the GNOME environment, go to the Activities overview. Type <token>add</token> into the search field, then select on the <application>Add/Remove Programs</application> icon that appears. Alternatively, look for the <application>Add/Remove Programs</application> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>System Tools</guilabel></menuchoice>. This will open the <application>Add/Remove Software</application> application.   Use the command <command>gk-application</command> to start the graphical application from the command line.  Details for installing and removing software with the <application>Add/Remove Software</application> application can be found below.
+			To start <application>PackageKit</application> in the GNOME environment, go to the Activities overview. Type <token>add</token> into the search field, then select on the <application>Add/Remove Programs</application> icon that appears. Alternatively, look for the <application>Add/Remove Programs</application> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>System Tools</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. This will open the <application>Add/Remove Software</application> application.   Use the command <command>gk-application</command> to start the graphical application from the command line.  Details for installing and removing software with the <application>Add/Remove Software</application> application can be found below.
 		</para>
 		<para>
 			To start <application>PackageKit</application> in the KDE environment, click <menuchoice><guimenu>KMenu</guimenu><guisubmenu>Applications</guisubmenu><guisubmenu>System</guisubmenu><guisubmenu>Software Management</guisubmenu></menuchoice>.  This starts the <command>kpackagekit</command> application. The KDE <application>Software Management</application> browse section works similar to a file browser and contains descriptions of the applications. The application uses <guibutton>install</guibutton> and <guibutton>remove</guibutton> buttons and there is a <guibutton>Help</guibutton> icon in the bottom left corner if you need additional assistance.
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
 		<section id="sect-User_Guide-Using_the_command_line_interface-Installing_software">
 			<title>Installing software</title>
 			<para>
-				To open the <application>Terminal</application> command line application, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Terminal</application> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>System Tools</guilabel></menuchoice>. 
+				To open the <application>Terminal</application> command line application, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Terminal</application> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>System Tools</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. 
 			</para>
 			<para>
 				Type: 
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ Is this ok [y/N] :
 		<section id="sect-User_Guide-Using_the_command_line_interface-Removing_software">
 			<title>Removing software</title>
 			<para>
-				To open the <application>Terminal</application> command line application, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Terminal</application> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>System Tools</guilabel></menuchoice>.			
+				To open the <application>Terminal</application> command line application, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Terminal</application> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>System Tools</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.			
 			</para>
 			<para>
 				Type: 
diff --git a/en-US/Media.xml b/en-US/Media.xml
index 2fe4579..0eb0716 100644
--- a/en-US/Media.xml
+++ b/en-US/Media.xml
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
 		<section id="sect-User_Guide-Writing_CDs_or_DVDs-Using_Brasero_in_GNOME">
 			<title>Using Brasero in GNOME</title>
 			<para>
-				<application>Brasero</application> is the default GNOME application for burning audio and video media. It can also be used to backup data or to burn an ISO image. To launch the program, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Brasero</application> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>Accessories</guilabel></menuchoice>.
+				<application>Brasero</application> is the default GNOME application for burning audio and video media. It can also be used to backup data or to burn an ISO image. To launch the program, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>Brasero</application> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Accessories</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
 			</para>
 			<para>
 			When first launched, the left side of <application>Brasero</application> features buttons to create a new project. This can be an audio project, data project, video project, or it can be a project to copy a disk or burn an image. 
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ When you are ready to burn your CD/DVD, select the image or media at the bottom
 		<section id="sect-User_Guide-Making_bootable_USB_media-USB_image_creation_in_Fedora">
 			<title>USB image creation in Fedora</title>
 			<para>
-				To install <application>liveusb-creator</application> in GNOME, go to the Activities overview. TType <token>add</token> into the search field, then select on the <application>Add/Remove Programs</application> icon that appears. Alternatively, look for the <application>Add/Remove Programs</application> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>System Tools</guilabel></menuchoice>. This will open the <application>Add/Remove Software</application> application. Searching for <literal>liveusb-creator</literal> and install it by ticking on the box next to it and clicking on <guilabel>Apply</guilabel>.
+				To install <application>liveusb-creator</application> in GNOME, go to the Activities overview. TType <token>add</token> into the search field, then select on the <application>Add/Remove Programs</application> icon that appears. Alternatively, look for the <application>Add/Remove Programs</application> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>System Tools</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. This will open the <application>Add/Remove Software</application> application. Searching for <literal>liveusb-creator</literal> and install it by ticking on the box next to it and clicking on <guilabel>Apply</guilabel>.
 			</para>
 			<para>
 				You can also install the application from the command line with the following command:
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ When you are ready to burn your CD/DVD, select the image or media at the bottom
 # yum install liveusb-creator
 </screen>
 			<para>
-				To open <application>liveusb-creator</application>, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>liveusb-creator</application> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>System Tools</guilabel></menuchoice>. To create live USB media, 
+				To open <application>liveusb-creator</application>, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>liveusb-creator</application> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>System Tools</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. To create live USB media, 
 				<orderedlist>
 					<listitem>
 						<para>
diff --git a/en-US/Office_tools.xml b/en-US/Office_tools.xml
index e3a8c85..daa7128 100644
--- a/en-US/Office_tools.xml
+++ b/en-US/Office_tools.xml
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
         <para>
         One of the most popular open source Office Suites is LibreOffice. This suite is included with Fedora and is also available for many other operating systems including Windows. Documentation for LibreOffice is available at <ulink url="http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/documentation/">http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/documentation/</ulink>.
         	<note>
-        		<application>LibreOffice</application> is currently very similar to <application>OpenOffice.Org</application>, another open source office suite, and they share much of the same codebase. If you are familiar with <application>OpenOffice.Org</application> you will find that most of the working methods you are used to will be the same in <application>LibreOffice</application>.
+        		<para><application>LibreOffice</application> is currently very similar to <application>OpenOffice.Org</application>, another open source office suite, and they share much of the same codebase. If you are familiar with <application>OpenOffice.Org</application> you will find that most of the working methods you are used to will be the same in <application>LibreOffice</application>.</para>
         	</note>  
 	    </para>
 
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ For more information, read Impress's product description at <ulink url="http://w
 				<application>gLabels</application> is a light-weight GNOME application for creating labels, business cards, and labels for CD and DVDs.
 			</para>
 			<para>
-				To start <application>gLabels</application> in GNOME, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>gLabels</application> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>Office</guilabel></menuchoice>. In KDE, click on  <menuchoice><guimenu>Kickoff Application Launcher </guimenu><guisubmenu> Applications </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Office </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> gLabels Label Designer</guisubmenu></menuchoice>.
+				To start <application>gLabels</application> in GNOME, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <application>gLabels</application> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Office</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. In KDE, click on  <menuchoice><guimenu>Kickoff Application Launcher </guimenu><guisubmenu> Applications </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Office </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> gLabels Label Designer</guisubmenu></menuchoice>.
 			</para>
 			<para>
 				When you open a new file from the icon or the menus at the top, you will have a chance to choose a template for your labels.  From the menus or toolbars you can then add objects such as text, box, line, ellipse, images, or barcodes.  You can then resize, move,or align the objects. You can customize the view, magnification, and toolbars.
diff --git a/en-US/Playing_games.xml b/en-US/Playing_games.xml
index aa00b82..ac2299b 100644
--- a/en-US/Playing_games.xml
+++ b/en-US/Playing_games.xml
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 			</variablelist>
 </para>
 		<para>
-			To play a game, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the game's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, see the <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>Games</guilabel></menuchoice> menu for a full list of installed games.
+			To play a game, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the game's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, see the <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Games</guimenuitem></menuchoice> menu for a full list of installed games.
 		</para>
 		
 		<section id="sect-User_Guide-Playing_games-Default_GNOME_games_-_Additional_Games_">
diff --git a/en-US/Playing_multimedia.xml b/en-US/Playing_multimedia.xml
index d280c47..3e8f59d 100644
--- a/en-US/Playing_multimedia.xml
+++ b/en-US/Playing_multimedia.xml
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
 		</itemizedlist>
 	</para>
 	<para>
-		To open these programs in the GNOME desktop, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the application in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>Sound and Video</guilabel></menuchoice>.
+		To open these programs in the GNOME desktop, go to the Activities overview. Type the first few letters of the application's name, then click on the icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the application in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Sound and Video</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
 	</para>	
 	<para>	
 		In the KDE desktop, click on their entries in the <menuchoice><guimenu>Kickoff Application Launcher</guimenu><guisubmenu>Applications</guisubmenu><guisubmenu>Multimedia</guisubmenu></menuchoice> menu.
@@ -94,6 +94,7 @@
 	  <title>GNOME multimedia applications</title>
 	  	<para>
 	  		The following multimedia applications are installed by default in the GNOME desktop:
+	  	</para>
 	  	
 
 	<section id="sect-User_Guide-Playing_multimedia_-_GNOME_Multimedia_Applications_-_Cheese_Webcam_Booth">
@@ -544,6 +545,7 @@
 		</note>  
 
 			</section>
+		</section>
 	</section>
 	
 	
@@ -828,7 +830,6 @@
 		</section>
 		
 
-	</section>
 
 <!-- End KDE section -->
 </section>
diff --git a/en-US/Sharing_your_desktop.xml b/en-US/Sharing_your_desktop.xml
index 6422538..9aeb423 100644
--- a/en-US/Sharing_your_desktop.xml
+++ b/en-US/Sharing_your_desktop.xml
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 	<section id="sect-User_Guide-Sharing_your_desktop-GNOME">
 		<title>GNOME</title>
 		<para>
-			To activate desktop sharing, go to the Activities overview. Type <token>remote</token> into the search bar, then click on the <guilabel>Remote Desktop</guilabel> icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <guilabel>Remote Desktop</guilabel> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>Other</guilabel></menuchoice>. This opens the <guilabel>Remote Desktop Preferences</guilabel> window.
+			To activate desktop sharing, go to the Activities overview. Type <token>remote</token> into the search bar, then click on the <guilabel>Remote Desktop</guilabel> icon that appears or press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. Alternatively, look for the <guilabel>Remote Desktop</guilabel> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Other</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. This opens the <guilabel>Remote Desktop Preferences</guilabel> window.
 		</para>
 		<para>
 			To share your desktop securely: <!--                                                   [[Image:Remote-desktop-f10.png|250px|right|thumb|The desktop sharing dialog box in GNOME.]]                                                   -->
@@ -78,10 +78,10 @@
 		<section id="sect-User_Guide-Sharing_your_desktop-GNOME_-_Viewing_someone_elses_desktop_">
 		  <title>Viewing someone else's desktop</title>
 		  	<para>
-		  		To view someone else's desktop over the Internet or other network connection, go to the Activities overview. Type <token>remote</token> into the search bar, then select the <guilabel>Remote Desktop Viewer</guilabel> icon that appears. Alternatively, look for the <guilabel>Remote Desktop</guilabel> icon in <menuchoice><guilabel>Applications</guilabel> > <guilabel>Other</guilabel></menuchoice>. This opens the <guilabel>Remote Desktop Viewer</guilabel> window.
+		  		To view someone else's desktop over the Internet or other network connection, go to the Activities overview. Type <token>remote</token> into the search bar, then select the <guilabel>Remote Desktop Viewer</guilabel> icon that appears. Alternatively, look for the <guilabel>Remote Desktop</guilabel> icon in <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Other</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. This opens the <guilabel>Remote Desktop Viewer</guilabel> window.
 		  	</para>
 		  	<para>
-		  		To connect to the remote desktop you wish to view, click on <guibutton>Connect</guibutton>. You will need the host name of the machine you wish to connect to, as well as the remote access password if required. For help in configuring a remote desktop connection, click on <menuchoice><guilabel>Help</guilabel> > <guilabel>Contents</guilabel></menuchoice> or press <keycap>F1</keycap>. 		
+		  		To connect to the remote desktop you wish to view, click on <guibutton>Connect</guibutton>. You will need the host name of the machine you wish to connect to, as well as the remote access password if required. For help in configuring a remote desktop connection, click on <menuchoice><guimenu>Help</guimenu><guimenuitem>Contents</guimenuitem></menuchoice> or press <keycap>F1</keycap>. 		
 		  	</para>
 		</section>
 	</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml b/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml
index 0f31615..27e53fc 100644
--- a/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml
+++ b/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml
@@ -40,9 +40,9 @@
 				</listitem>
 		</itemizedlist>
 		</para>
-		<para>A third area can be accessed by clicking the <guimenuitem>Activities</guimenuitem> button, or by moving the mouse to the top left hand <firstterm>Hot Corner</firstterm>. Alternatively, you can press the <keycap>windows</keycap> key on your keyboard. The area that appears is called the <firstterm>Activities overview</firstterm>.
+		<para>A third area can be accessed by clicking the <guimenuitem>Activities</guimenuitem> button, or by moving the mouse to the top left hand <firstterm>Hot Corner</firstterm>. Alternatively, you can press the <keycap>windows</keycap> key on your keyboard. The area that appears is called the <firstterm>Activities overview</firstterm>.</para>
 
-		<section id="sect-User_Guide-_The_GNOME_desktop_-_The_top bar_">
+		<section id="sect-User_Guide-_The_GNOME_desktop_-_The_top_bar_">
 			<!--                                                                                                                                                    The Top Bar                                                                                                                                                    --><title> The Top Bar </title>
 			<para>
 				This bar stretches across the top of the screen. The left side contains: 
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
 				</para>
 			</section>
 
-			<section id="sect-User_Guide-_The_top_bar_-_Universal Access_Menu_">
+			<section id="sect-User_Guide-_The_top_bar_-_Universal_Access_Menu_">
 <!--
 Universal
 Access
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ Power Manager Applet
 				<note>
 					<title>Switching your computer off</title>
 						<para>
-							To switch your computer off, open the user menu and hold down the <keycap>Alt</keycap>. The <menuchoice><guilabel>Suspend</guilabel></menuchoice> option will change to <menuchoice><guilabel>Power Off...</guilabel></menuchoice>. Click on this option, keeping the <keycap>Alt</keycap> held down, to power off your computer. You can congiure GNOME to switch off your computer when you press the power button by setting the appropriate option in <menuchoice><guilabel>System Settings</guilabel> > <guilabel>Power</guilabel></menuchoice>.
+							To switch your computer off, open the user menu and hold down the <keycap>Alt</keycap>. The <menuchoice><guilabel>Suspend</guilabel></menuchoice> option will change to <menuchoice><guilabel>Power Off...</guilabel></menuchoice>. Click on this option, keeping the <keycap>Alt</keycap> held down, to power off your computer. You can congiure GNOME to switch off your computer when you press the power button by setting the appropriate option in <menuchoice><guimenu>System Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Power</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
 						</para>
 				</note>				
 			</section>
@@ -250,10 +250,10 @@ Power Manager Applet
 				The default desktop area, or <firstterm>workspace</firstterm>, is where the windows of currently active windows are normally displayed.
 			</para> 
 			<para>
-				You can switch between active applications by using the keyboard shortcut <keycombo><keycap>Alt</keycap> + <keycap>Tab</keycap></keycombo>. The <firstterm>application switcher</firstterm> will appear showing icons of active applications. <keycombo><keycap>Alt</keycap> + <keycap>Tab</keycap></keycombo> will cycle through the applications from left to right, while <keycombo><keycap>Shift</keycap> + <keycap>Alt</keycap> + <keycap>Tab</keycap></keycombo> will cycle from right to left. If an active application has more than one window open, you can also use <keycombo><keycap>Alt</keycap> + <keycap>`</keycap></keycombo> and <keycombo><keycap>Shift</keycap> + <keycap>Alt</keycap> + <keycap>`</keycap></keycombo> to cycle through the windows, where <keycap>`</keycap> is the key above the <keycap>Tab</keycap> key on your keyboard.
+				You can switch between active applications by using the keyboard shortcut <keycombo><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>Tab</keycap></keycombo>. The <firstterm>application switcher</firstterm> will appear showing icons of active applications. <keycombo><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>Tab</keycap></keycombo> will cycle through the applications from left to right, while <keycombo><keycap>Shift</keycap><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>Tab</keycap></keycombo> will cycle from right to left. If an active application has more than one window open, you can also use <keycombo><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>`</keycap></keycombo> and <keycombo><keycap>Shift</keycap><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>`</keycap></keycombo> to cycle through the windows, where <keycap>`</keycap> is the key above the <keycap>Tab</keycap> key on your keyboard.
 			</para>
 			<para>
-				You can also add more workspaces and cycle between them using <keycombo><keycap>Control</keycap> + <keycap>Alt</keycap> + <keycap>Up</keycap></keycombo> and <keycombo><keycap>Control</keycap> + <keycap>Alt</keycap> + <keycap>Down</keycap></keycombo>. You can move an active window to another workspace by using <keycombo><keycap>Control</keycap> + <keycap>Shift</keycap> + <keycap>Alt</keycap> + <keycap>Up</keycap></keycombo> or <keycombo><keycap>Control</keycap> + <keycap>Shift</keycap> + <keycap>Alt</keycap> + <keycap>Down</keycap></keycombo>. If no workspace exists below the current one, a new one will be created automatically.
+				You can also add more workspaces and cycle between them using <keycombo><keycap>Control</keycap><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>Up</keycap></keycombo> and <keycombo><keycap>Control</keycap><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>Down</keycap></keycombo>. You can move an active window to another workspace by using <keycombo><keycap>Control</keycap><keycap>Shift</keycap><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>Up</keycap></keycombo> or <keycombo><keycap>Control</keycap><keycap>Shift</keycap><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>Down</keycap></keycombo>. If no workspace exists below the current one, a new one will be created automatically.
 			</para>    
 
 		</section>


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