[user-guide] Changes to working in Gnome Tour

Zach Oglesby zoglesby at fedoraproject.org
Fri Sep 9 18:20:37 UTC 2011


commit c43f43ef827fc4c39f595efc513f7677a8e51383
Author: Zach Oglesby <oglesbyzm at gmail.com>
Date:   Fri Sep 9 14:20:08 2011 -0400

    Changes to working in Gnome Tour

 en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml |   12 ++++++------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml b/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml
index 27e53fc..94ea70a 100644
--- a/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml
+++ b/en-US/Tour_of_the_GNOME_desktop.xml
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
 						</listitem>
 						<listitem>
 						<para>
-							a Volume Control and Sound Preferences applet.
+							the Volume Control and Sound Preferences applet.
 						</para>
 					</listitem>
 					<listitem>
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
 					</listitem>
 					<listitem>
 						<para>
-							the <firstterm>user menu</firstterm> (showing your name).
+							the <firstterm>User Menu</firstterm> (showing your name).
 						</para>
 					</listitem>
 				</itemizedlist>
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
 			<section id="sect-User_Guide-_The_top_bar_-_Clock_and_calendar_">
 				<!--                                                                                                                                                    Clock and calendar                                                                                                                                                    --><title> Clock and calendar </title>
 				<para>
-					Click the clock in the center of the top bar to see the current date, a month-by-month calendar, and a list of your upcoming appointments. You can also access the date and time settings and open your full <application>Evolution</application> calendar directly from the menu.
+					Click the clock in the center of the top bar to see the current date, a month-by-month calendar, and a list of your upcoming appointments. You can also access the date and time settings and view your <application>Evolution</application> or Google calendars directly from the menu.
 				</para>
 			</section>
 
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ Menu--><title>The Universal Access Menu</title>
 				</section>
 
 			<section id="sect-User_Guide-_The_top_bar_-_Volume_control_">
-				<!--                                                                                                                                                    Volume control                                                                                                                                                    --><title> Volume control </title>
+				<!--                                                                                                                                                    Volume control                                                                                                                                                    --><title> Volume Control </title>
 				<para>
 					The volume control allows you to quickly change the overall volume of sound on your computer. Click the icon to show a slider, and then use the mouse to drag the slider to the desired volume. Click on <menuchoice><guilabel>Sound Settings</guilabel></menuchoice> to change settings for sound input and output devices and system sounds.
 				</para>
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ Power Manager Applet
 				</para>
 			</section>
 			
-			<section id="sect-User_Guide-_The_top_bar_-_The_user_menu_">			<!--                                                                                                                                                    The user menu                                                                                                                                                    --><title> The user menu </title>
+			<section id="sect-User_Guide-_The_top_bar_-_The_user_menu_">			<!--                                                                                                                                                    The user menu                                                                                                                                                    --><title> The User Menu </title>
 				<para>
 					If you click on your name in the right hand corner of the top bar, the user menu appears. From here you can perform a number of tasks:
 					<itemizedlist>
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ Overview
 		</itemizedlist>
 	</para>
 	<para>
-			You can leave the Activities overview at any time by clicking on a window or application icon to focus it. You can also press the <keycap>windows</keycap> key, which will return you to the last focused window on the current workspace.
+			You can leave the Activities overview at any time by clicking on a window or application icon to focus it. You can also press the <keycap>meta</keycap> key, which will return you to the last focused window on the current workspace.
 	</para>
 	
 </section>


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