[release-notes] Improve abstract

John J. McDonough jjmcd at fedoraproject.org
Wed Mar 21 18:25:40 UTC 2012


commit 43bd97884633c98189b19caee8d73501616071fe
Author: John J. McDonough <jjmcd at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Wed Mar 21 14:25:34 2012 -0400

    Improve abstract

 en-US/Article_Info.xml |    6 +++++-
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Article_Info.xml b/en-US/Article_Info.xml
index c0636aa..dc0f344 100644
--- a/en-US/Article_Info.xml
+++ b/en-US/Article_Info.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,11 @@
   <pubsnumber>0</pubsnumber>
   <abstract>
     <para>
-      This document details the release notes for Fedora &PRODVER;.
+      This document provides the release notes for Fedora &PRODVER;.
+      It describes major changes offered in the <application>Beefy
+      Miracle</application> as compared to Fedora &PREVVER;. For a
+      detailed listing of all changes, refer to the Fedora Technical
+      Notes.
     </para>
   </abstract>
   <corpauthor>


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