[install-guide] more noload cleanup and structure correction
Pete Travis
immanetize at fedoraproject.org
Mon Mar 26 05:27:52 UTC 2012
commit c7c3a926a5d680490ae704c8068c12b22a35df4b
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date: Sun Mar 25 23:27:30 2012 -0600
more noload cleanup and structure correction
...Graphical_Installation_x86-common-section-1.xml | 6 +++---
en-US/Installation_Phase_2-x86.xml | 6 ++++--
en-US/adminoptions.xml | 2 +-
en-US/new-users.xml | 8 +++-----
4 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Graphical_Installation_x86-common-section-1.xml b/en-US/Graphical_Installation_x86-common-section-1.xml
index fc103c2..1ee6501 100644
--- a/en-US/Graphical_Installation_x86-common-section-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Graphical_Installation_x86-common-section-1.xml
@@ -3,11 +3,11 @@
<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
-<section id="s1-guimode-textinterface-x86">
-<xi:include href="TUI-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+<section id="s1-guimode-textinterface-x86"><title>Text Mode Installation</title> <para>Fedora can be installed with a textbased interface.</para>
+<!--i:include href="TUI-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />-->
<!-- Graphical Interface Usage - Installing in text mode does not prevent you from using a graphical interface. -->
- <xi:include href="Graphical_Installation_common-section-1-title-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+<!-- <xi:include href="Graphical_Installation_common-section-1-title-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
<!-- The Text Mode Installation Program User Interface --> <xi:include href="Graphical_Installation_common-section-1-indexterm-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- installation - program - text mode user interface --> <xi:include href="Graphical_Installation_common-section-1-indexterm-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- user interface, text mode - installation program --> <xi:include href="Graphical_Installation_common-important-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
diff --git a/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-x86.xml b/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-x86.xml
index 003f8fd..77e9f21 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-x86.xml
@@ -6,8 +6,10 @@
<chapter id="ch-Installation_Phase_2-x86">
<xi:include href="Installation_Phase_2-common-title-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- text mode install -->
- <xi:include href="Installation_Phase_2-common-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <!-- Before the graphical installation program starts, you must choose a language --> <xi:include href="Graphical_Installation_x86-common-section-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+<!--orphaned copy, exluding <xi:include href="Installation_Phase_2-common-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
+ <!-- Before the graphical installation program starts, you must choose a language -->
+
+<xi:include href="Graphical_Installation_x86-common-section-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- The Text Mode Installation Program User Interface
links to Graphical_Installation_common-section-2.xml:
Using the Keyboard to Navigate --> <xi:include href="Language_Selection-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
diff --git a/en-US/adminoptions.xml b/en-US/adminoptions.xml
index 3c887e3..05fc0cf 100644
--- a/en-US/adminoptions.xml
+++ b/en-US/adminoptions.xml
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
<section id="sn-boot-options-installmethod">
<title>Specifying the Installation Method</title>
<warning>
- <title><option>askmethod</option> and <option>asknetowrk</option> are deprocated.</title>
+ <title><option>askmethod</option> and <option>asknetowrk</option> are depricated.</title>
<para>The <option>askmethod</option> and <option>asknetwork</option> options are no longer available. Use <option>root=</option> to specify the installation method, and see <xref linkend="sn-boot-options-network" /> to configure network interfaces.
</para>
</warning>
diff --git a/en-US/new-users.xml b/en-US/new-users.xml
index eb3489d..93f8d16 100644
--- a/en-US/new-users.xml
+++ b/en-US/new-users.xml
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
flash disk image is a copy of an entire disk in a format
suitable for writing directly to a USB flash disk.</para>
<para>For more information on burning CDs and DVDs, refer to
- <xref linkend="sn-making-media"/>.</para>
+ <xref linkend="sn-making-media" />.</para>
<para>
@@ -194,8 +194,7 @@ AMD: Athlon 64, Athlon II, Sempron64, Phenom series, Fusion series, Bulldozer se
<para>If you are unsure what type of processor your computer uses, choose
<systemitem>i386</systemitem>.</para>
<para>The exception is if your computer is a non-Intel based Apple
- Macintosh. Refer to <xref
- linkend="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Architectures/PowerPC" /> for more information on using Fedora on these systems. </para>
+ Macintosh. Refer to <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Architectures/PowerPC" /> for more information on using Fedora on these systems. </para>
</note>
<note>
<title>Intel Atom Processor Architectures Vary</title>
@@ -213,8 +212,7 @@ AMD: Athlon 64, Athlon II, Sempron64, Phenom series, Fusion series, Bulldozer se
includes the architecture type in the file name. For example, the file for
the DVD distribution of Fedora &PRODVER; for x86_64 is named
<filename>Fedora-&PRODVER;-x86_64-DVD.iso</filename>. Refer to
- <xref
- linkend="sn-which-arch"/> if you are unsure of your computer's
+ <xref linkend="sn-which-arch" /> if you are unsure of your computer's
architecture.</para>
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
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