[install-guide] Began new UI restructure of Anaconda chapter: added pre-install hub section, updated lang, keyboard,

Jack Reed jjr at fedoraproject.org
Wed Oct 3 01:14:03 UTC 2012


commit b24299b1da94c9bc6d0e1895447d3f4d03328cb0
Author: Jack Reed <jreed at redhat.com>
Date:   Wed Oct 3 11:13:37 2012 +1000

    Began new UI restructure of Anaconda chapter: added pre-install hub section, updated lang, keyboard, timezone, root passwd sections

 .gitignore                                       |    1 +
 en-US/.directory                                 |    4 +-
 en-US/Account_Configuration_common-para-3.xml    |    4 +-
 en-US/Account_Configuration_common-para-6.xml    |    2 +-
 en-US/Graphical_Installation-x86.xml             |   26 +--------
 en-US/Graphical_Installation_pre-install-hub.xml |   65 ++++++++++++++++++++++
 en-US/Key_Board_Configuration-x86.xml            |    5 +-
 en-US/Language_Configuration-x86.xml             |    5 +-
 en-US/Language_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-1.xml  |    2 +-
 en-US/images/accountconfig/rootpassword.png      |  Bin 20385 -> 27395 bytes
 en-US/images/kbdconfig/keyboard.png              |  Bin 31583 -> 43657 bytes
 en-US/images/langselection/langselection-GUI.png |  Bin 48393 -> 69679 bytes
 en-US/images/preinstallhub/preinstall_hub.png    |  Bin 0 -> 91134 bytes
 en-US/images/timezone/timezone.png               |  Bin 127700 -> 258569 bytes
 14 files changed, 82 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/.gitignore b/.gitignore
index bfa6e92..f86c117 100644
--- a/.gitignore
+++ b/.gitignore
@@ -1,3 +1,4 @@
 en-US/images/storagedevices/.directory
 publish/**/*
 tmp/**/*
+en-US/.directory
diff --git a/en-US/.directory b/en-US/.directory
index 8d9770e..887dade 100644
--- a/en-US/.directory
+++ b/en-US/.directory
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [Dolphin]
 AdditionalInfoV2=Details_Size,Details_Date,CustomizedDetails
-Timestamp=2011,10,19,9,55,15
-Version=2
+Timestamp=2012,10,2,15,25,41
+Version=3
 ViewMode=1
diff --git a/en-US/Account_Configuration_common-para-3.xml b/en-US/Account_Configuration_common-para-3.xml
index a1c9c0f..e6c3097 100644
--- a/en-US/Account_Configuration_common-para-3.xml
+++ b/en-US/Account_Configuration_common-para-3.xml
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
 %BOOK_ENTITIES;
 ]>
 <para>
-	The installation program prompts you to set a root password<footnote> <para>
+	The installation program requires you to set a root password<footnote> <para>
 		A root password is the administrative password for your Fedora system. You should only log in as root when needed for system maintenance. The root account does not operate within the restrictions placed on normal user accounts, so changes made as root can have implications for your entire system.
 	</para>
-	 </footnote> for your system. <emphasis>. You cannot proceed to the next stage of the installation process without entering a root password.</emphasis>
+	 </footnote> for your system. <emphasis>. You cannot proceed to the installation itself without entering a root password.</emphasis>
 </para>
 
diff --git a/en-US/Account_Configuration_common-para-6.xml b/en-US/Account_Configuration_common-para-6.xml
index 4db50ba..fd6c3c8 100644
--- a/en-US/Account_Configuration_common-para-6.xml
+++ b/en-US/Account_Configuration_common-para-6.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
 %BOOK_ENTITIES;
 ]>
 <para>
-	<!--  $Id:  --> Enter the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> password into the <guilabel>Root Password</guilabel> field. Fedora displays the characters as asterisks for security. Type the same password into the <guilabel>Confirm</guilabel> field to ensure it is set correctly. After you set the root password, select <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to proceed.
+	<!--  $Id:  --> Enter the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> password into the <guilabel>Root Password</guilabel> field. Fedora displays the characters as asterisks for security. Type the same password into the <guilabel>Confirm</guilabel> field to ensure it is set correctly. After you set the root password, select <guibutton>Back</guibutton> to return to the Pre-Installation Hub.
 </para>
 
diff --git a/en-US/Graphical_Installation-x86.xml b/en-US/Graphical_Installation-x86.xml
index 9b53a29..f69d227 100644
--- a/en-US/Graphical_Installation-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Graphical_Installation-x86.xml
@@ -143,29 +143,7 @@
 	</section>
 	
 	<xi:include href="Language_Configuration-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Language Selection  --> <xi:include href="Key_Board_Configuration-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Keyboard Configuration  --> <xi:include href="Storage_Devices-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Storage devices  --> <!--  Not in Beta 
-	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Installation_Number-x86.xml"/>   --> <!--  Installation Number for RHEL --> <xi:include href="Netconfig-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  The installation system automatically detects any existing...  --> <xi:include href="Time_Zone-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Time Zone  --> <xi:include href="Account_Configuration-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Account Configuration  --> <xi:include href="Assign_Storage_Devices-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Assign Storage devices  --> <xi:include href="Initializing_Hard_Disk-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Initializing Hard Disk  --> <xi:include href="Upgrading-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  The installation system automatically detects any existing...  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Disk Partitioning Setup  --> <xi:include href="Encrypt-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Disk Encryption  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Partitioning Your System
-	     Graphical Display of Hard Drives
-	     The partitioning screen
-	     Partition Fields
-	     Recommended Partitioning Scheme
-	     Adding Partitions
-	     Editing Partitions --> <xi:include href="Write_changes_to_disk_x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  The installer prompts you to confirm the partitioning options that you selected.  --> <xi:include href="X86_Bootloader.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  x86, AMD64, and Intel 64 Boot Loader Configuration  --> <!-- 	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Netconfig-x86.xml"/>   --> <!--  Network Configuration  --> <!-- 	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Time_Zone-x86.xml"/>   --> <!--  Time Zone  --> <!--  for RHEL goes here  --> <!-- 	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Account_Configuration-common.xml"/>   --> <!--  Account Configuration  --> <!--  for RHEL goes here  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Package Selection  --> <!-- 	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Prepare_To_Install-x86.xml"/>  --> <!--  Prepare to Install  --> <xi:include href="Installing_Packages-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Installing Packages  --> <xi:include href="Complete-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Installation Complete  -->
+	 <!--  Language Selection  --> <xi:include href="Graphical_Installation_pre-install-hub.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  The Installation Hub  --> 
 </chapter>
 
diff --git a/en-US/Graphical_Installation_pre-install-hub.xml b/en-US/Graphical_Installation_pre-install-hub.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..ccd8bf9
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Graphical_Installation_pre-install-hub.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,65 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE chapter PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<section id="pre-install-hub-x86">
+  <title>
+      The Pre-Installation Hub
+  </title>
+  <para>
+    The Pre-Installation Hub is the central screen for setting up an installation.
+  </para>
+  <figure float="0">
+		<title>The pre-installation hub</title>
+		 <mediaobject>
+			<imageobject>
+				<imagedata fileref="images/preinstallhub/preinstall_hub.png" format="PNG" width="444" />
+			</imageobject>
+			 <textobject>
+				<para>
+					Pre-installation hub screen
+				</para>
+
+			</textobject>
+
+		</mediaobject>
+
+	</figure>
+	<para>
+	  Instead of directing you through consecutive screens, <application>anaconda</application> allows you to configure your installation in the order you choose.
+	</para>
+	<para>
+	  Use your mouse to select a section. When you have completed configuring a section, or if you would like to complete that section later, click <guibutton>Back</guibutton>.
+	</para>
+	<para>
+	  Sections that still require your attention are marked with a warning symbol. If any required work is outstanding, a note at the bottom of the screen warns you that these sections must be completed before you can continue, and the <guibutton>Continue</guibutton> button will be greyed out.
+	</para>
+	<para>
+	  To cancel the installation, click <guibutton>Quit</guibutton>.
+	</para> 
+	 <xi:include href="Key_Board_Configuration-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Keyboard Configuration  --> <xi:include href="Storage_Devices-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Storage devices  --> <!--  Not in Beta 
+	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Installation_Number-x86.xml"/>   --> <!--  Installation Number for RHEL --> <xi:include href="Netconfig-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  The installation system automatically detects any existing...  --> <xi:include href="Time_Zone-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Time Zone  --> <xi:include href="Account_Configuration-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Account Configuration  --> <xi:include href="Assign_Storage_Devices-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Assign Storage devices  --> <xi:include href="Initializing_Hard_Disk-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Initializing Hard Disk  --> <xi:include href="Upgrading-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  The installation system automatically detects any existing...  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Disk Partitioning Setup  --> <xi:include href="Encrypt-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Disk Encryption  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Partitioning Your System
+	     Graphical Display of Hard Drives
+	     The partitioning screen
+	     Partition Fields
+	     Recommended Partitioning Scheme
+	     Adding Partitions
+	     Editing Partitions --> <xi:include href="Write_changes_to_disk_x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  The installer prompts you to confirm the partitioning options that you selected.  --> <xi:include href="X86_Bootloader.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  x86, AMD64, and Intel 64 Boot Loader Configuration  --> <!-- 	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Netconfig-x86.xml"/>   --> <!--  Network Configuration  --> <!-- 	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Time_Zone-x86.xml"/>   --> <!--  Time Zone  --> <!--  for RHEL goes here  --> <!-- 	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Account_Configuration-common.xml"/>   --> <!--  Account Configuration  --> <!--  for RHEL goes here  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Package Selection  --> <!-- 	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Prepare_To_Install-x86.xml"/>  --> <!--  Prepare to Install  --> <xi:include href="Installing_Packages-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Installing Packages  --> <xi:include href="Complete-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Installation Complete  -->
+</section>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/en-US/Key_Board_Configuration-x86.xml b/en-US/Key_Board_Configuration-x86.xml
index c817d29..040cf10 100644
--- a/en-US/Key_Board_Configuration-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Key_Board_Configuration-x86.xml
@@ -8,8 +8,11 @@
 	 <!--  Keyboard Configuration  --> <!--  Index terms  --> <xi:include href="Key_Board_Configuration_x86_ppc-indexterm-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <xi:include href="Key_Board_Configuration_x86_ppc-indexterm-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  End Index terms  --> <para>
-		Using your mouse, select the correct layout type (for example, U.S. English) for the keyboard you would prefer to use for the installation and as the system default (refer to the figure below).
+		Using your mouse, select the correct layout type (for example, U.S. English) for the keyboard you would prefer to use for the installation and as the system default by using the arrow buttons to move your preference to the top of the list (refer to the figure below).
 	</para>
+	<para>
+		To test the keyboard layout, use the mouse to click inside the text box at the right. Type any text to confirm that your selection functions correctly.
+	 </para>	
 	 <xi:include href="Key_Board_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  Using your mouse, select the correct layout type ...  --> <figure float="0">
 		<title>Keyboard Configuration</title>
diff --git a/en-US/Language_Configuration-x86.xml b/en-US/Language_Configuration-x86.xml
index d71a2a4..88f7cc2 100644
--- a/en-US/Language_Configuration-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Language_Configuration-x86.xml
@@ -8,7 +8,10 @@
 	 <!--  Keyboard Configuration  --> <!--  Index terms  --> <xi:include href="Language_Configuration_x86_ppc-indexterm-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <xi:include href="Language_Configuration_x86_ppc-indexterm-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  End Index terms  --> <para>
-		Using your mouse, select the language (for example, U.S. English) you would prefer to use for the installation and as the system default (refer to the figure below).
+		At the Welcome screen, use your mouse to select the language (for example, English (United States)) you would prefer to use for the installation and as the system default.
+	</para>
+	<para>
+		Alternatively, type your preferred language into the search box (refer to the figure below).
 	</para>
 	 <xi:include href="Language_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  Using your mouse, select the correct layout type ...  --> <figure float="0">
diff --git a/en-US/Language_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-1.xml b/en-US/Language_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-1.xml
index b6100e4..4bc0b73 100644
--- a/en-US/Language_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Language_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-1.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
 %BOOK_ENTITIES;
 ]>
 <para>
-	Once you have made your selection, click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to continue.
+	Once you have made your selection, click <guibutton>Continue</guibutton>.
 </para>
 
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