[install-guide] Updating button labels to reflect Beta changes
Jack Reed
jjr at fedoraproject.org
Wed Oct 24 01:04:05 UTC 2012
commit 753988251bff53d26033954e4e54fef21c92dbad
Author: Jack Reed <jreed at redhat.com>
Date: Wed Oct 24 11:03:36 2012 +1000
Updating button labels to reflect Beta changes
en-US/Graphical_Installation_pre-install-hub.xml | 4 +++-
en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml | 10 +++++-----
en-US/Key_Board_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-1.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Language_Configuration-hub-x86.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Netconfig-x86.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Netconfig_common-section-2.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Time_Zone_common-para-6.xml | 2 +-
7 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Graphical_Installation_pre-install-hub.xml b/en-US/Graphical_Installation_pre-install-hub.xml
index da43a27..819a7cc 100644
--- a/en-US/Graphical_Installation_pre-install-hub.xml
+++ b/en-US/Graphical_Installation_pre-install-hub.xml
@@ -33,9 +33,11 @@
Use your mouse to select a section. When you have completed configuring a section, or if you would like to complete that section later, click <guibutton>Back</guibutton>.
</para>
<para>
- Sections that still require your attention are marked with a warning symbol. If any required work is outstanding, a note at the bottom of the screen warns you that these sections must be completed before you can continue, and the <guibutton>Continue</guibutton> button will be greyed out.
+ Sections that still require your attention are marked with a warning symbol. If any required work is outstanding, a note at the bottom of the screen warns you that these sections must be completed before you can continue.
</para>
<para>
+ Once all required sections are complete, click <guibutton>Begin Installation</guibutton>.
+ <para>
To cancel the installation, click <guibutton>Quit</guibutton>.
</para>
<xi:include href="Time_Zone-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
diff --git a/en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml b/en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml
index 3466bcd..381ccc6 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml
@@ -20,15 +20,15 @@
</para>
<para>
- To specify a network location, choose from the following options in the drop-down menu: <guilabel>Closest mirror</guilabel>, <guilabel>http</guilabel>, <guilabel>https</guilabel>, <guilabel>ftp</guilabel>, and <guilabel>nfs</guilabel>.
+ To specify a network location, choose from the following options in the drop-down menu: <guilabel>Closest mirror</guilabel>, <guilabel>http://</guilabel>, <guilabel>https://</guilabel>, <guilabel>ftp://</guilabel>, and <guilabel>nfs</guilabel>.
</para>
<para>
- Type a network location in the address box. (If you selected <guilabel>Closest mirror</guilabel>, an address is not required.)
+ Using your selection as the start of the location URL, type the rest into the address box. (If you selected <guilabel>Closest mirror</guilabel>, an address is not required.)
</para>
<para>
- If you choose to install via NFS, an additional box will appear for you to specify any NFS mount options.
+ If you choose NFS, the address box will be grayed out. Another box will appear for you to specify any NFS mount options.
</para>
<para>
@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@
</para>
<para>
- To add a proxy, check <guilabel>Enable HTTP proxy</guilabel> and type the URL into the <guilabel>Proxy URL</guilabel> box. If your proxy requires authentication, check <guilabel>Use Authentication</guilabel> and enter a username and password.
+ Check <guilabel>Enable HTTP proxy</guilabel> and type the URL into the <guilabel>Proxy URL</guilabel> box. If your proxy requires authentication, check <guilabel>Use Authentication</guilabel> and enter a username and password. Click <guibutton>Add</guibutton>.
</para>
<para>
- Check the <guilabel>Updates</guilabel> option if you do not want to install the latest available updates, and would prefer to install the default versions from your specified installation source.
+ Check the <guilabel>Updates</guilabel> option if you do not want to install the latest available updates and would prefer to install the default versions from your specified installation source.
</para>
<para>
diff --git a/en-US/Key_Board_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-1.xml b/en-US/Key_Board_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-1.xml
index b6100e4..4aec7b2 100644
--- a/en-US/Key_Board_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Key_Board_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-1.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- Once you have made your selection, click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to continue.
+ Once you have made your selection, click <guibutton>Done</guibutton> to return to the pre-installation hub.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Language_Configuration-hub-x86.xml b/en-US/Language_Configuration-hub-x86.xml
index f866ee2..e61545e 100644
--- a/en-US/Language_Configuration-hub-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Language_Configuration-hub-x86.xml
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
<!-- Alternatively, type your preferred language into the search box ... -->
<para>
- Once you have made your selection, click <guibutton>Back</guibutton> to return to the Pre-Installation Hub.
+ Once you have made your selection, click <guibutton>Done</guibutton> to return to the Pre-Installation Hub.
</para>
<figure float="0">
<title>Language Configuration</title>
diff --git a/en-US/Netconfig-x86.xml b/en-US/Netconfig-x86.xml
index b9ab5b2..e6a7c0f 100644
--- a/en-US/Netconfig-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Netconfig-x86.xml
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
To add a new connection, click -->
<para>
- When you have finished editing network settings, click <guibutton>Apply</guibutton> to save the new configuration. If you reconfigured a device that was already active during installation, you must restart the device to use the new configuration — refer to <xref linkend="restart-network-device-x86"/>.
+ When you have finished editing network settings, click <guibutton>Save</guibutton> to save the new configuration. If you reconfigured a device that was already active during installation, you must restart the device to use the new configuration — refer to <xref linkend="restart-network-device-x86"/>.
</para>
<xi:include href="Netconfig_common-section-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
diff --git a/en-US/Netconfig_common-section-2.xml b/en-US/Netconfig_common-section-2.xml
index d9151f2..b0e63f5 100644
--- a/en-US/Netconfig_common-section-2.xml
+++ b/en-US/Netconfig_common-section-2.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<section>
<title>The Ethernet tab</title>
<para>
- Use the <guilabel>Ethernet</guilabel> tab to specify or change the <firstterm>media access control</firstterm> (MAC) address for the network adapter, and either set the <firstterm>maximum transmission unit</firstterm> (MTU, in bytes) that can pass through the interface.
+ Use the <guilabel>Ethernet</guilabel> tab to specify or change the <firstterm>media access control</firstterm> (MAC) address for the network adapter, and set the <firstterm>maximum transmission unit</firstterm> (MTU, in bytes) that can pass through the interface either manually or automatically.
</para>
<figure float="0">
<title>The Ethernet tab</title>
diff --git a/en-US/Time_Zone_common-para-6.xml b/en-US/Time_Zone_common-para-6.xml
index adbfe9c..4aec7b2 100644
--- a/en-US/Time_Zone_common-para-6.xml
+++ b/en-US/Time_Zone_common-para-6.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- Click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to proceed.
+ Once you have made your selection, click <guibutton>Done</guibutton> to return to the pre-installation hub.
</para>
More information about the docs-commits
mailing list