[release-notes] cleaning up, added revision history entry

[Pete Travis]

commit 96f75a413a25800f85ed8656a1d0b6c7a82325cc
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Sun Oct 28 23:14:19 2012 -0600

    cleaning up, added revision history entry

 en-US/Article_Info.xml     |    3 +--
 en-US/Installation.xml     |    4 ++--
 en-US/Release_Notes.xml    |    7 ++++---
 en-US/Revision_History.xml |   10 ++++++++++
 4 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Article_Info.xml b/en-US/Article_Info.xml
index cdd01ab..b486ebb 100644
--- a/en-US/Article_Info.xml
+++ b/en-US/Article_Info.xml
@@ -12,8 +12,7 @@
   <abstract>
     <para>
       This document provides the release notes for Fedora &PRODVER;.
-      It describes major changes offered in the <application>Beefy
-      Miracle</application> as compared to Fedora &PREVVER;. For a
+      It describes major changes offered in the <productname>Spherical Cow</productname> as compared to Fedora &PREVVER;. For a
       detailed listing of all changes, refer to the Fedora Technical
       Notes.
     </para>
diff --git a/en-US/Installation.xml b/en-US/Installation.xml
index aab2975..eb4d893 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installation.xml
@@ -9,14 +9,14 @@
     <title>Dual booting with <productname>Windows 8</productname></title>
     <para>
       <warning>
-	<title><productname>Windows 8</productname><function>Fast Restart</function></title>
+	<title><productname>Windows 8</productname> <function>Fast Restart</function></title>
 	<para>
 	  Using the <function>fast restart</function> feature of <productname>Windows 8</productname> and rebooting into Fedora may lead to data loss. Files written to the <productname>Windows</productname> partition by Fedora may be deleted when rebooting into <productname>Windows 8</productname>. This may be avoided by disabling the <function>fast restart</function> feature in <productname>Windows 8</productname>.
         </para>
       </warning>
     </para>
     <para>
-      The <package>ntfs-3g</package> driver used by Fedora 18 for <function>NTFS</function> filesystems will attempt to detect the dangerous situation and prevent mounting to avoid data loss. This is less true of previous Fedora releases, and <function>fast restart</function> should still be disabled to ensure proper function and prevent data loss.
+      The <package>ntfs-3g</package> driver used by Fedora 18 for <function>NTFS</function> filesystems will attempt to detect the dangerous situation and prevent mounting to avoid data loss. This is less true of previous Fedora releases, and <function>fast restart</function> <emphasis>should still be disabled</emphasis> to ensure proper function and prevent data loss.
     </para>
   </section>
   <section>
diff --git a/en-US/Release_Notes.xml b/en-US/Release_Notes.xml
index fa0cfa7..b54acef 100644
--- a/en-US/Release_Notes.xml
+++ b/en-US/Release_Notes.xml
@@ -25,6 +25,9 @@
     <xi:include href="Feedback.xml"
 		xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
     </xi:include>
+    <xi:include href="RelNotesDirChange.xml"
+                xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
+    </xi:include>
   </section>
 
   <section id="sect-Release_Notes-Changes_for_Sysadmin">
@@ -62,9 +65,7 @@
     <xi:include href="Database_Servers.xml"
                 xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
     </xi:include>
-    <xi:include href="RelNotesDirChange.xml"
-                xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
-    </xi:include>
+    
     <xi:include href="File_Servers.xml"
                 xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
     </xi:include>
diff --git a/en-US/Revision_History.xml b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
index c42cc83..468e9eb 100644
--- a/en-US/Revision_History.xml
+++ b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
@@ -8,6 +8,16 @@
   <simpara>
     <revhistory>
       <revision>
+	<revnumber>17.95</revnumber>
+	<date>Sun Oct 28 2012</date>
+	<revdescription>
+	  <simplelist>
+	    <member>Initial revision for F18</member>
+	    <member>Pull in and proofread content from wiki</member>
+	  </simplelist>
+	</revdescription>
+      </revision>
+      <revision>
 	<revnumber>17.1</revnumber>
 	<date>Tue May 29 2012</date>
 	<author>