[install-guide] Updating install screenshots where necessary

pbokoc pbokoc at fedoraproject.org
Thu Dec 12 19:19:18 UTC 2013


commit 406203a1a73a62319e2367a9fd21441da3a8940b
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc at redhat.com>
Date:   Thu Dec 12 20:20:03 2013 +0100

    Updating install screenshots where necessary

 en-US/Boot_x86_ppc-figure-1.xml                    |   11 ++++-------
 en-US/Language_Configuration-x86.xml               |   16 +++++-----------
 en-US/Language_Support-x86.xml                     |    2 +-
 en-US/images/boot/boot_screen.png                  |  Bin 3477 -> 3548 bytes
 en-US/images/diskpartitioning/ddmain.png           |  Bin 42217 -> 57217 bytes
 .../installationsource/installationsource.png      |  Bin 46769 -> 59323 bytes
 en-US/images/kbdconfig/keyboard.png                |  Bin 35323 -> 36113 bytes
 en-US/images/langselection/langselection-GUI.png   |  Bin 73007 -> 87981 bytes
 .../images/langselection/langselection-hub-GUI.png |  Bin 73298 -> 85812 bytes
 en-US/images/netconfig/networkconfig.png           |  Bin 35707 -> 44764 bytes
 en-US/images/pkgselection/pkg-group-repos.png      |  Bin 19402 -> 58139 bytes
 en-US/images/preinstallhub/preinstall_hub.png      |  Bin 66460 -> 76029 bytes
 12 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Boot_x86_ppc-figure-1.xml b/en-US/Boot_x86_ppc-figure-1.xml
index 4ab5cf9..476b8bd 100644
--- a/en-US/Boot_x86_ppc-figure-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Boot_x86_ppc-figure-1.xml
@@ -4,18 +4,15 @@
 %BOOK_ENTITIES;
 ]>
 <figure float="0">
-	<title>The boot screen</title>
-	 <mediaobject>
+	<title>The Boot Screen</title>
+	<mediaobject>
 		<imageobject>
-			<imagedata fileref="images/boot/boot_screen.png" format="PNG" width="444" />
+			<imagedata fileref="images/boot/boot_screen.png" format="PNG" />
 		</imageobject>
-		 <textobject>
+		<textobject>
 			<para>
 				The boot screen
 			</para>
-
 		</textobject>
-
 	</mediaobject>
 </figure>
-
diff --git a/en-US/Language_Configuration-x86.xml b/en-US/Language_Configuration-x86.xml
index e043f9f..835b43f 100644
--- a/en-US/Language_Configuration-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Language_Configuration-x86.xml
@@ -8,12 +8,11 @@
 	 <!--  Keyboard Configuration  --> <!--  Index terms  --> <xi:include href="Language_Configuration_x86_ppc-indexterm-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <xi:include href="Language_Configuration_x86_ppc-indexterm-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  End Index terms  --> <para>
-		At the <guilabel>Welcome to Fedora &PRODVER;</guilabel> screen, use your mouse to select the language (for example, <guilabel>English (United States)</guilabel>) you would prefer to use for the installation and as the system default.
+		At the <guilabel>Welcome to Fedora &PRODVER;</guilabel> screen, use your mouse to select the language (for example, <guilabel>English</guilabel>) you prefer to use for the installation and as the system default on the left side. On the right side, select your keyboard layout (for example, <guilabel>English (United Kingdom)</guilabel>). Again, this layout will be used during the installation and it will be the default on the installed system. You can also change the keyboard layout at any time during the installation using the layout switching tool in the upper right hand corner. 
+	</para>
+	<para>
+		Alternatively, type your preferred language into the search box and select from the list of results.
 	</para>
-	
-	<xi:include href="Language_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Alternatively, type your preferred language into the search box ...  --> <xi:include href="Language_Configuration_x86_ppc-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  To also set the keyboard layout to the default for your selected language ...  --> 
 	<para>
 		Once you have made your selection, click <guibutton>Continue</guibutton>.
 	</para>
@@ -25,14 +24,9 @@
 			</imageobject>
 			 <textobject>
 				<para>
-					Language selection screen
+					Language and keyboard layout selection screen
 				</para>
-
 			</textobject>
-
 		</mediaobject>
-
 	</figure>
 </section>
-
-
diff --git a/en-US/Language_Support-x86.xml b/en-US/Language_Support-x86.xml
index c09ac7c..301200a 100644
--- a/en-US/Language_Support-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Language_Support-x86.xml
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 			</imageobject>
 			 <textobject>
 				<para>
-					Language support screen
+					The language support screen
 				</para>
 
 			</textobject>
diff --git a/en-US/images/boot/boot_screen.png b/en-US/images/boot/boot_screen.png
index 56bdca0..78382f0 100644
Binary files a/en-US/images/boot/boot_screen.png and b/en-US/images/boot/boot_screen.png differ
diff --git a/en-US/images/diskpartitioning/ddmain.png b/en-US/images/diskpartitioning/ddmain.png
index 9226a0a..445cbf4 100644
Binary files a/en-US/images/diskpartitioning/ddmain.png and b/en-US/images/diskpartitioning/ddmain.png differ
diff --git a/en-US/images/installationsource/installationsource.png b/en-US/images/installationsource/installationsource.png
index a798d62..d2f0e14 100644
Binary files a/en-US/images/installationsource/installationsource.png and b/en-US/images/installationsource/installationsource.png differ
diff --git a/en-US/images/kbdconfig/keyboard.png b/en-US/images/kbdconfig/keyboard.png
index e9044e8..22fc368 100644
Binary files a/en-US/images/kbdconfig/keyboard.png and b/en-US/images/kbdconfig/keyboard.png differ
diff --git a/en-US/images/langselection/langselection-GUI.png b/en-US/images/langselection/langselection-GUI.png
index 80291bb..744cdec 100644
Binary files a/en-US/images/langselection/langselection-GUI.png and b/en-US/images/langselection/langselection-GUI.png differ
diff --git a/en-US/images/langselection/langselection-hub-GUI.png b/en-US/images/langselection/langselection-hub-GUI.png
index 20e2d7b..87aa838 100644
Binary files a/en-US/images/langselection/langselection-hub-GUI.png and b/en-US/images/langselection/langselection-hub-GUI.png differ
diff --git a/en-US/images/netconfig/networkconfig.png b/en-US/images/netconfig/networkconfig.png
index 600dfd0..48b943d 100644
Binary files a/en-US/images/netconfig/networkconfig.png and b/en-US/images/netconfig/networkconfig.png differ
diff --git a/en-US/images/pkgselection/pkg-group-repos.png b/en-US/images/pkgselection/pkg-group-repos.png
index 5a17f22..9032b10 100644
Binary files a/en-US/images/pkgselection/pkg-group-repos.png and b/en-US/images/pkgselection/pkg-group-repos.png differ
diff --git a/en-US/images/preinstallhub/preinstall_hub.png b/en-US/images/preinstallhub/preinstall_hub.png
index ae67ba3..c433529 100644
Binary files a/en-US/images/preinstallhub/preinstall_hub.png and b/en-US/images/preinstallhub/preinstall_hub.png differ


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