[system-administrators-guide] Appendix A: Consistent Network Device Naming | Removing parts which no longer apply. | Bill Nottingh

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commit b6a5464f059fafba4cf50bd99300d452281c48fb
Author: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley at redhat.com>
Date:   Thu Jan 10 10:44:20 2013 +0100

    Appendix A: Consistent Network Device Naming | Removing parts which no longer apply. | Bill Nottingham
    
    e-mail from Bill applies to Fed 17 and 18
    From: Bill Nottingham <notting at redhat.com>
    To: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley at redhat.com>
    Subject: Re: Fwd: Re: rhel-7-feature-page-network-interface-renaming |
     Changes to Appendix A for Fedora SysAdmin Guide

 en-US/Consistent_Network_Device_Naming.xml |    6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Consistent_Network_Device_Naming.xml b/en-US/Consistent_Network_Device_Naming.xml
index e9de1cf..8f21f24 100644
--- a/en-US/Consistent_Network_Device_Naming.xml
+++ b/en-US/Consistent_Network_Device_Naming.xml
@@ -97,15 +97,15 @@
   <section id="sect-Consistent_Network_Device_Naming-Enabling_and_Disabling">
     <title>Enabling and Disabling the Feature</title>
     <para>
-      To disable the consistent network device naming on Dell systems that would normally have it on by default, pass the following option on the boot command line, both during and after installation:
+      To disable the consistent network device naming on systems that would normally have it on by default, pass the following option on the boot command line, both during and after installation:
     </para>
     <screen><option>biosdevname=0</option></screen>
     <para>
-      To enable this feature on other system types that meet the minimum requirements (see <xref linkend="sect-Consistent_Network_Device_Naming-System_Requirements" />), pass the following option on the boot command line, both during and after installation:
+      To enable this feature, pass the following option on the boot command line, both during and after installation:
     </para>
     <screen><option>biosdevname=1</option></screen>
     <para>
-      Unless the system meets the minimum requirements, this option will be ignored and the system will boot with the traditional network interface name format.
+      Unless the system meets the minimum requirements (see <xref linkend="sect-Consistent_Network_Device_Naming-System_Requirements" />), this option will be ignored and the system will boot with the traditional network interface name format.
     </para>
     <para>
       If the <option>biosdevname</option> install option is specified, it must remain as a boot option for the lifetime of the system.