[release-notes/f18] pulling installation beat from master

[Pete Travis]

commit 54bd3d8fbfa629b0f86e8d2fbc8321f091247be4
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Tue Jan 15 22:59:47 2013 -0700

    pulling installation beat from master

 en-US/Installation.xml |   11 ++++-------
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Installation.xml b/en-US/Installation.xml
index 9ec495f..5214ad9 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installation.xml
@@ -80,12 +80,9 @@
       <para>
         This is the current process for doing an upgrade from F17 to F18 using fedup. This documentation will change over time as the process evolves. 
       </para>
-        <note><title>sudo or root</title>
-          <para>The commands listed below use sudo but could also be run as root</para>
-        </note>
       <para>
         It is possible to install <application>fedup</application> on an Fedora 17 system using <application>yum</application>:
-        <screen><command>yum install fedup</command></screen>
+        <screen><command>su -c "yum install fedup"</command></screen>
       </para>
     </section>
     <section>
@@ -94,7 +91,7 @@
         Using the <application>fedup-cli</application> command, prepare the upgrade using the following command:
       </para>
        <para>
-        <screen><command>sudo fedup-cli --network 18 --debuglog fedupdebug.log </command></screen>
+        <screen><command>su -c "fedup-cli --network 18 --debuglog fedupdebug.log"</command></screen>
       </para>
       <para>
         At this point, the Fedora 17 system is ready for upgrade.
@@ -104,7 +101,7 @@
     <section>
       <title>Running the Upgrade</title>
       <para>
-        Once you reboot, there will be a 'System Upgrade' boot option at the grub prompt. The system will boot into a special environment to perform the upgrade.The screen will show a graphical progress screen during upgrade.
+        Once you reboot, there will be a 'System Upgrade' boot option at the grub prompt. The system will boot into a special environment to perform the upgrade. The screen will show a graphical progress screen during upgrade.
       </para>
       <note>
         <title>Go get some coffee</title>
@@ -147,7 +144,7 @@
     </section>
     <section>
       <title>Third party modules</title>
-      <para>The <filename>initramfs</filename> created by FedUP may need to be rebuild in some cases where drivers are provided by a third party repository. If you experience issues with thrid party drivers after the upgrade, boot into a single or multi-user target and issue the following command:
+      <para>The <filename>initramfs</filename> created by FedUP may need to be rebuilt in some cases where drivers are provided by a third party repository. If you experience issues with third party drivers after the upgrade, boot into a single or multi-user target and issue the following command:
       <screen>
         <command># dracut /boot/initramfs-$(uname -r).img $(uname -r)</command>
       </screen>