[install-guide] Editing Storage and Partitioning section for IQSG, incl. adding unique strings and image

Jack Reed jjr at fedoraproject.org
Thu Jan 24 03:21:41 UTC 2013


commit 1ea1a50f9ee90727cd2ce00a536f9af4d9e857c3
Author: Jack Reed <jreed at redhat.com>
Date:   Thu Jan 24 13:19:44 2013 +1000

    Editing Storage and Partitioning section for IQSG, incl. adding unique strings and image

 en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_quickstart-para-1.xml |    8 +++
 en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_quickstart-para-2.xml |    8 +++
 en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml              |   49 ++++++++++---------
 ...Disk_Partitioning_Setup_quickstart-figure-1.xml |   21 ++++++++
 .../images/diskpartitioning/write_changes-live.png |  Bin 0 -> 34043 bytes
 .../images/diskpartsetup/install-options-live.png  |  Bin 0 -> 17242 bytes
 6 files changed, 63 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_quickstart-para-1.xml b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_quickstart-para-1.xml
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+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_quickstart-para-1.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,8 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<para>
+	To create and edit the partitions yourself, check the box labeled <guilabel>Let me customize the partitioning of the disks</guilabel>, then click <guibutton>Continue</guibutton> to reach the <guilabel>Manual Partitioning</guilabel> section. Refer to the <citetitle>Fedora Installation Guide</citetitle> for instructions on manual partitioning.
+</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_quickstart-para-2.xml b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_quickstart-para-2.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..e81a06b
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_quickstart-para-2.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,8 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<para>
+	Click <guibutton>Continue</guibutton> to allow Fedora to automatically configure the partitions for you and return to the Installation Summary Menu.
+</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml
index fcb11e0..04acef5 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml
@@ -9,50 +9,53 @@
 	 <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-indexterm-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-indexterm-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-indexterm-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  End Index terms  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-caution-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  It is always a good idea to back up any data ...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-note-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Installation in text mode...  --> <important>
+	 <!--  End Index terms  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-caution-1.xml " xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
+	 <!--  It is always a good idea to back up any data ...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-note-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
+	 <!--  Installation in text mode...  --> <important condition="install-guide">
 		<title>Important — Booting from RAIDs</title>
-		 <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-		 <!--  If you have a RAID card, be aware that some BIOSes...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-		 <!--  A /boot/ partition is also necessary for ...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+		 <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
+		 <!--  If you have a RAID card, be aware that some BIOSes...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
+		 <!--  A /boot/ partition is also necessary for ...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
 		 <!--  If you have chosen to automatically partition your system ...  -->
 	</important>
 	<para>
 		Select <guilabel>Installation Destination</guilabel> from the Installation Summary Menu to select and partition the disks Fedora will be installed on.
 	</para>  
-	 <para>
+	 <para condition="install-guide">
 		Partitioning allows you to divide your hard drive into isolated sections, where each section behaves as its own hard drive. Partitioning is particularly useful if you run multiple operating systems. If you are not sure how you want your system to be partitioned, read <xref linkend="ch-partitions-x86" /> for more information.
 	</para>
 	 <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-figure-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  Choose automatic partitioning or manual partitioning...  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  On this screen, you can choose between three different automatic partitioning...   --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  On this screen, you can choose between three different automatic partitioning...   --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
 	 <!--  If you do not feel comfortable with partitioning your system  --> <!-- <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
 	 <!--  Your options are:  --> <!-- <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_x86-variablelist-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	   Remove all partitions on selected drives and create default layout
 	     Remove linux partitions on selected drives and create default layout
 	     Caution
 	     Use free space on selected drives and create default layout  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Choose your preferred partitioning method...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-5.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Choose your preferred partitioning method...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-5.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
 	 <!--  To encrypt all partitions except the /boot partition...   --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-6.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  Click Continue once you have made your selections...   --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  The Installation Options dialog now appears...  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-figure-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Choose automatic partitioning or manual partitioning...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-7.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  If there is sufficient space...  -->  <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-itemizedlist-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Click Cancel and add more disks...  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-figure-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Choose automatic partitioning or manual partitioning...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-8.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  If there is not enough space...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-itemizedlist-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Free space available...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-11.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Choose from the following paths...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-itemizedlist-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Click Cancel and add more disks...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-10.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Whichever path you choose...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-4.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Click Partition Scheme Configuration to choose...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-list-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Standard Partition...  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Important - chain loading...  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  The Installation Options dialog now appears...  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-figure-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
+	 <!--  Choose automatic partitioning or manual partitioning...  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_quickstart-figure-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="quick-start" />
+	 <!--  Choose automatic partitioning or manual partitioning...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-7.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
+	 <!--  If there is sufficient space...  -->  <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_quickstart-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="quick-start" />
+	 <!--  To create and edit the partitions yourself...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_quickstart-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="quick-start" />
+	 <!--  If there is sufficient space...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-itemizedlist-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide"/>
+	 <!--  Click Cancel and add more disks...  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-figure-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide"/>
+	 <!--  Choose automatic partitioning or manual partitioning...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-8.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
+	 <!--  If there is not enough space...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-itemizedlist-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
+	 <!--  Free space available...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-11.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
+	 <!--  Choose from the following paths...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-itemizedlist-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide"/>
+	 <!--  Click Cancel and add more disks...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-10.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
+	 <!--  Whichever path you choose...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-4.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
+	 <!--  Click Partition Scheme Configuration to choose...  --> <xi:include href="Automatic_Partitioning_common-list-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
+	 <!--  Standard Partition...  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
+	 <!--  Important - chain loading...  --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide" />
 	 <!--  Important - multipath and non-multipath...  --> 
 	 
 	 
-	 <xi:include href="X86_Bootloader.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <xi:include href="X86_Bootloader.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide"/>
 	 <!--  x86, AMD64, and Intel 64 Boot Loader Configuration  -->
 </section>
 
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup_quickstart-figure-1.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup_quickstart-figure-1.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..559f784
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup_quickstart-figure-1.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,21 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE figure PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<figure float="0">
+	<title>Installation Options dialog</title>
+	 <mediaobject>
+		<imageobject>
+			<imagedata fileref="images/diskpartsetup/install-options-live.png" format="PNG" width="444" />
+		</imageobject>
+		 <textobject>
+			<para>
+				Edit the partition configuration and select custom partitioning
+			</para>
+
+		</textobject>
+
+	</mediaobject>
+</figure>
+
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