[install-guide] BZ#979826 - Edited out the network login section from User Creation

pbokoc pbokoc at fedoraproject.org
Mon Jul 1 20:14:11 UTC 2013


commit 7b7ee382f503acddda75607afabb5d41fbced276
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc at redhat.com>
Date:   Mon Jul 1 22:13:02 2013 +0200

    BZ#979826 - Edited out the network login section from User Creation

 en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml |  209 +++++++++++++++++++--------------------
 1 files changed, 102 insertions(+), 107 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml b/en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml
index 5d14685..3446e2b 100644
--- a/en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml
+++ b/en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml
@@ -5,127 +5,122 @@
 
 <!-- TEXT FROM firstboot.xml -->
 
- <section id="sn-firstboot-systemuser">
-		<title>User Creation</title>
-
+<section id="sn-firstboot-systemuser">
+	<title>User Creation</title>
+	<para>
+		Create a user account for yourself with this screen. Always use this account to log in to your Fedora system, rather than using the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> account.
+	</para>
+	<figure float="0"><title>The Create User screen</title>
+		<mediaobject>
+			<imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/firstboot/fb-createuser.png" format="PNG" scalefit="0" /></imageobject>
+			<textobject>
+		  		<para>
+					The Create User screen
+				</para>
+			</textobject>
+		</mediaobject>                                                                                                                                       
+	</figure>
+	<para condition="install-guide">
+		Enter a user name and your full name, and then enter your chosen password. Type your password once more in the <guilabel>Confirm Password</guilabel> box to ensure that it is correct. <!-- FIXME Refer to <xref linkend="sn-account_configuration" /> for guidelines on selecting a secure password. -->
+	</para>
+	<para condition="install-guide">
+		Check the <guilabel>Make this user administrator</guilabel> box if you would like administrative privileges. This will place you in the wheel group, which gives you access to all administrative functions, including installing and updating software, creating and altering configuration files, and administering other users.
+	</para>
+	<!-- <para condition="install-guide">
+		To configure Fedora to use network services for authentication of user information, click <guibutton>Use Network Login</guibutton>. Refer to <xref linkend="sn-firstboot-authentication"/> for further details.
+	</para>  -->
+	<para condition="install-guide">
+		To create additional users or customise your first user account, click <guibutton>Advanced</guibutton> to open the <guilabel>Advanced User Configuration</guilabel> dialog.
+	</para>
+	<figure float="0" condition="install-guide"><title>Advanced User Configuration</title>
+	 	<mediaobject>
+			<imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/firstboot/fb-createuser-usermanager.png" format="PNG" scalefit="0" /></imageobject>
+			<textobject>
+				<para>
+					Advanced User Configuration
+				</para>
+			</textobject>
+		</mediaobject>
+	</figure>
+	<para condition="install-guide">
+		In <guilabel>Advanced User Configuration</guilabel> you can edit various properties, such as a private group for the user, the preferred login shell, and user and group IDs.
+	</para>
+	<important condition="install-guide">
+		<title>Important — Create at least one user account</title>
+		<para>
+			If you selected GNOME as your desktop environment during the package selection process, you will be able to create an user account after the installation finishes. Other desktop environments, such as KDE or Xfce, do not offer this functionality. It is therefore important to create at least one user account during this step; otherwise you will not be able to log in to the Fedora graphical environment. If you skipped this step during installation, refer to <xref linkend="Trouble_After_Booting-GUI"/>.
+		</para>
+	</important>
+	<note condition="install-guide">
+		<title>Note — Creating Extra User Accounts</title>
 		<para>
-			Create a user account for yourself with this screen. Always use this account to log in to your Fedora system, rather than using the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> account.
+			To add additional user accounts to your system after the installation is complete, choose <menuchoice><guimenu>System</guimenu> <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Users &amp; Groups</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
 		</para>
+	</note>
 
-		<figure float="0"><title>The Create User screen</title>
+	<!--  <section id="sn-firstboot-authentication" condition="install-guide">
+		<title>Authentication Configuration</title>
+		
+		<para>
+			If you clicked <guibutton>Use Network Login</guibutton> on the <guilabel>Create User</guilabel> screen, you must now specify how users are to be authenticated on the system. Use the drop-down menu to select from the following types of user database:
+		</para>
+		<itemizedlist>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+					<guimenuitem>Local accounts only</guimenuitem> (for use when the user database on the network is not accessible)
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+					<guimenuitem>LDAP</guimenuitem> (Lightweight Directory Access Protocol)
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+					<guimenuitem>NIS</guimenuitem> (Network Information Service)
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+					<guimenuitem>Winbind</guimenuitem> (for use with Microsoft Active Directory)
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+		</itemizedlist>
+		<figure float="0"><title>Firstboot Authentication Configuration screen</title>
 		  <mediaobject>
-			  <imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/firstboot/fb-createuser.png" format="PNG" scalefit="0" /></imageobject>
+			  <imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/firstboot/fb-authentication.png" format="PNG" width="444"/></imageobject>
 			  <textobject><para>
-					  The Create User screen
+					  Firstboot Authentication Configuration screen
 				  </para>
 			  </textobject>
-		  </mediaobject>                                                                                                                                       
+		  </mediaobject>
 		</figure>
-
-
-		<para condition="install-guide">
-			Enter a user name and your full name, and then enter your chosen password. Type your password once more in the <guilabel>Confirm Password</guilabel> box to ensure that it is correct. <!-- FIXME Refer to <xref linkend="sn-account_configuration" /> for guidelines on selecting a secure password. -->
-		</para>
-		<para condition="install-guide">
-			Check the <guilabel>Make this user administrator</guilabel> box if you would like administrative privileges. This will place you in the wheel group, which gives you access to all administrative functions, including installing and updating software, creating and altering configuration files, and administering other users.
-		</para>
-		<para condition="install-guide">
-			To configure Fedora to use network services for authentication of user information, click <guibutton>Use Network Login</guibutton>. Refer to <xref linkend="sn-firstboot-authentication"/> for further details.
+		<para>
+			When you select the type of user database appropriate for your network, you must provide additional details relevant to that database type. For example, if you select <literal>LDAP</literal>, you must specify the <firstterm>base distinguished name</firstterm> for LDAP searches, and the address of the LDAP server. You must also select an <guilabel>Authentication Method</guilabel> relevant to the type of user database that you chose, for example, a Kerberos password, LDAP password, or NIS password. 
 		</para>
-		<para condition="install-guide">
-			To create additional users or customise your first user account, click <guibutton>Advanced</guibutton> to open the <application>User Manager</application>.
+		<para>
+			The <guilabel>Advanced Options</guilabel> tab lets you enable other authentication mechanisms, including fingerprint readers, smart cards, and local access control in <filename>/etc/security/access.conf</filename>. 
 		</para>
-		
-		<figure float="0" condition="install-guide"><title>Advanced User Configuration</title>
+		<figure float="0"><title>Firstboot authentication Advanced Options screen</title>
 		  <mediaobject>
-			  <imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/firstboot/fb-createuser-usermanager.png" format="PNG" scalefit="0" /></imageobject>
+			  <imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/firstboot/fb-auth-advanced.png" format="PNG" width="444"/></imageobject>
 			  <textobject><para>
-					  Advanced User Configuration
+					  Firstboot authentication Advanced Options screen
 				  </para>
 			  </textobject>
 		  </mediaobject>
 		</figure>
-		
-		<para condition="install-guide">
-		  In <application>User Manager</application> you can edit various properties, such as a private group for the user, the preferred login shell, and user and group IDs.
+		<para>
+		  The <guilabel>Password Options</guilabel> tab lets you set format requirements for user passwords, including minimum length and required character classes such as lower case, upper case, and numbers.
 		</para>
-		
-		<important condition="install-guide">
-			<title>Important — Create at least one user account</title>
-			<para>
-				If you selected GNOME as your desktop environment during the package selection process, you will be able to create an user account after the installation finishes. Other desktop environments, such as KDE or Xfce, do not offer this functionality. It is therefore important to create at least one user account during this step; otherwise you will not be able to log in to the Fedora graphical environment. If you skipped this step during installation, refer to <xref linkend="Trouble_After_Booting-GUI"/>.
-			</para>
-		</important>
-		<note condition="install-guide">
-			<title>Note — Creating Extra User Accounts</title>
-			<para>
-				To add additional user accounts to your system after the installation is complete, choose <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu> <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Users &amp; Groups</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
-			</para>
-		</note>
-		
-		<section id="sn-firstboot-authentication" condition="install-guide">
-			<title>Authentication Configuration</title>
-			
-			<para>
-				If you clicked <guibutton>Use Network Login</guibutton> on the <guilabel>Create User</guilabel> screen, you must now specify how users are to be authenticated on the system. Use the drop-down menu to select from the following types of user database:
-			</para>
-			<itemizedlist>
-				<listitem>
-					<para>
-						<guimenuitem>Local accounts only</guimenuitem> (for use when the user database on the network is not accessible)
-					</para>
-				</listitem>
-				<listitem>
-					<para>
-						<guimenuitem>LDAP</guimenuitem> (Lightweight Directory Access Protocol)
-					</para>
-				</listitem>
-				<listitem>
-					<para>
-						<guimenuitem>NIS</guimenuitem> (Network Information Service)
-					</para>
-				</listitem>
-				<listitem>
-					<para>
-						<guimenuitem>Winbind</guimenuitem> (for use with Microsoft Active Directory)
-					</para>
-				</listitem>
-			</itemizedlist>
-			<figure float="0"><title>Firstboot Authentication Configuration screen</title>
-			  <mediaobject>
-				  <imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/firstboot/fb-authentication.png" format="PNG" width="444"/></imageobject>
-				  <textobject><para>
-						  Firstboot Authentication Configuration screen
-					  </para>
-				  </textobject>
-			  </mediaobject>
-			</figure>
-			<para>
-				When you select the type of user database appropriate for your network, you must provide additional details relevant to that database type. For example, if you select <literal>LDAP</literal>, you must specify the <firstterm>base distinguished name</firstterm> for LDAP searches, and the address of the LDAP server. You must also select an <guilabel>Authentication Method</guilabel> relevant to the type of user database that you chose, for example, a Kerberos password, LDAP password, or NIS password. 
-			</para>
-			<para>
-				The <guilabel>Advanced Options</guilabel> tab lets you enable other authentication mechanisms, including fingerprint readers, smart cards, and local access control in <filename>/etc/security/access.conf</filename>. 
-			</para>
-			<figure float="0"><title>Firstboot authentication Advanced Options screen</title>
-			  <mediaobject>
-				  <imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/firstboot/fb-auth-advanced.png" format="PNG" width="444"/></imageobject>
-				  <textobject><para>
-						  Firstboot authentication Advanced Options screen
-					  </para>
-				  </textobject>
-			  </mediaobject>
-			</figure>
-			<para>
-			  The <guilabel>Password Options</guilabel> tab lets you set format requirements for user passwords, including minimum length and required character classes such as lower case, upper case, and numbers.
-			</para>
-			<figure float="0"><title>Firstboot authentication Password Options screen</title>
-			  <mediaobject>
-				  <imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/firstboot/fb-auth-passwd.png" format="PNG" width="444"/></imageobject>
-				  <textobject><para>
-						  Firstboot authentication Password Options screen
-					  </para>
-				  </textobject>
-			  </mediaobject>
-			</figure>
-		</section>
-	</section>
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+		<figure float="0"><title>Firstboot authentication Password Options screen</title>
+		  <mediaobject>
+			  <imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/firstboot/fb-auth-passwd.png" format="PNG" width="444"/></imageobject>
+			  <textobject><para>
+					  Firstboot authentication Password Options screen
+				  </para>
+			  </textobject>
+		  </mediaobject>
+		</figure>
+	</section> -->
+</section>
\ No newline at end of file


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