[release-notes] taking a crack at describing firstboot

Pete Travis immanetize at fedoraproject.org
Sun May 12 22:56:15 UTC 2013


commit 5b6d8214686a32cdc34d0d00100a3c96a4176a3c
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Sun May 12 16:49:04 2013 -0600

    taking a crack at describing firstboot

 en-US/Installation.xml |   39 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Installation.xml b/en-US/Installation.xml
index 809a0d9..32b5965 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installation.xml
@@ -6,16 +6,31 @@
 <section>
   <title>Installation</title>
   <!--Feature page last updated 20 March 2013, this should be reviewed-->
-  <para>
-    The rewrite of the <package>anaconda</package> installer begun in Fedora &PREVVER; continues. Fedora &PRODVER; provides support during installation for advanced storage, such as <function>fcoe</function>, <function>iscsi</function>, and <function>multipath</function>. The text mode of the installer has also been improved.
-  </para>
-  <!--Feature page last updated 19 March 2013-->
-  <para>
-    Fedora can now join a domain from a kickstart file or from the <package>anaconda</package>, using one time passwords and a simple syntax.
-    <screen>
-      # example kickstart lines to join realm:
-      network --hostname=machine.ad.example.com
-      realm join --one-time-password=MyPassword ad.example.com
-    </screen>
-  </para>
+  <section>
+    <title>Advanced Storage</title>
+    <para>
+      The rewrite of the <package>anaconda</package> installer begun in Fedora &PREVVER; continues. Fedora &PRODVER; provides support during installation for advanced storage, such as <function>fcoe</function>, <function>iscsi</function>, and <function>multipath</function>. The text mode of the installer has also been improved.
+    </para>
+  </section>
+
+  <section>
+    <title><productname>AD</productname> domain integration</title>
+    <!--Feature page last updated 19 March 2013-->
+    <para>
+      Fedora can now join a domain from a kickstart file or from the <package>anaconda</package>, using one time passwords and a simple syntax.
+      <screen>
+        # example kickstart lines to join realm:
+        network --hostname=machine.ad.example.com
+        realm join --one-time-password=MyPassword ad.example.com
+      </screen>
+    </para>
+  </section>
+  
+  <section>
+    <title>Firstboot configuration</title>
+    <para>
+      Initial setup screens have been revamped for Fedora &PRODVER;.  <application>GNOME</application> now offers user creation and configuration at first boot, and other environments will use the new functionality from the installer.
+    </para>
+  </section>
+
 </section>


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