[install-guide] Edits to btrfs procedure, including removing common LVM/btrfs material due to GUI text differences

Jack Reed jjr at fedoraproject.org
Tue May 28 06:25:45 UTC 2013


commit 6433f1443715f0518852c8ec9c4fc0451dd3ec05
Author: Jack Reed <jreed at redhat.com>
Date:   Tue May 28 16:25:32 2013 +1000

    Edits to btrfs procedure, including removing common LVM/btrfs material due to GUI text differences

 en-US/Create_Btrfs-common-procedure.xml  |   13 +++++++++----
 en-US/Create_LVM-Btrfs-common-para-1.xml |    8 --------
 en-US/Create_LVM-Btrfs-common-para-2.xml |    8 --------
 en-US/Create_LVM-Btrfs-common-para-3.xml |    8 --------
 en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml                 |   13 +++++++++----
 5 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Create_Btrfs-common-procedure.xml b/en-US/Create_Btrfs-common-procedure.xml
index 5050ccc..6487ab2 100644
--- a/en-US/Create_Btrfs-common-procedure.xml
+++ b/en-US/Create_Btrfs-common-procedure.xml
@@ -23,10 +23,15 @@
 	  </step>
 	  
 	  <step>
-	    <xi:include href="Create_LVM-Btrfs-common-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  To edit the group, click Modify  --> <xi:include href="Create_LVM-Btrfs-common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Alternatively, click the dropdown menu  --> <xi:include href="Create_LVM-Btrfs-common-para-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Click Save once the group is configured  --> 
+	    <para>
+		To edit the group, click <guibutton>Modify</guibutton> to open the <guilabel>Configure Volume</guilabel> dialog. Choose a name and select which disks will be included. Optionally, select a RAID level and a Sizing Policy (choose between <guilabel>Automatic</guilabel>, <guilabel>As large as possible</guilabel>, and <guilabel>Fixed</guilabel>, to set the size manually). For information on RAID levels, refer to <xref linkend="Create_Software_RAID-x86" />.
+	    </para> 
+	    <para>
+		Alternatively, click the dropdown menu and select <guilabel>Create a new volume</guilabel> to add an additional group using the same dialog.
+	    </para> 
+	    <para>
+		Click <guibutton>Save</guibutton> once the volume is configured.
+	    </para>
 	 
 	 <note>
 	   <para>
diff --git a/en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml b/en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml
index e4fe830..6f8e592 100644
--- a/en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml
@@ -51,10 +51,15 @@
 	  </step>
 	      
 	  <step>
-	    <xi:include href="Create_LVM-Btrfs-common-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  To edit the group, click Modify  --> <xi:include href="Create_LVM-Btrfs-common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Alternatively, click the dropdown menu  --> <xi:include href="Create_LVM-Btrfs-common-para-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Click Save once the group is configured  --> 
+	    <para>
+		To edit the group, click <guibutton>Modify</guibutton> to open the <guilabel>Configure Volume Group</guilabel> dialog. Choose a name and select which disks will be included. Optionally, select a RAID level and a Sizing Policy (choose between <guilabel>Automatic</guilabel>, <guilabel>As large as possible</guilabel>, and <guilabel>Fixed</guilabel>, to set the size manually). For information on RAID levels, refer to <xref linkend="Create_Software_RAID-x86" />.
+	    </para> 
+	    <para>
+		Alternatively, click the dropdown menu and select <guilabel>Create a new volume group</guilabel> to add an additional group using the same dialog.
+	    </para> 
+	    <para>
+		Click <guibutton>Save</guibutton> once the group is configured.
+	    </para>
 
 	  </step>
 	  


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