[release-notes] spelling corrections
Pete Travis
immanetize at fedoraproject.org
Sun Oct 20 23:20:59 UTC 2013
commit 82fb5939c92ce46919eb79867beed731545e89de
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date: Sun Oct 20 17:20:54 2013 -0600
spelling corrections
en-US/Database_Servers.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Desktop.xml | 8 ++++----
en-US/Development.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Development_GCC_Tools.xml | 2 +-
en-US/I18n.xml | 4 ++--
en-US/Networking.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Virtualization.xml | 2 +-
7 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Database_Servers.xml b/en-US/Database_Servers.xml
index 03b93cd..4a4395a 100644
--- a/en-US/Database_Servers.xml
+++ b/en-US/Database_Servers.xml
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
<primary>Hadoop</primary>
</indexterm>
<para>
- Fedora 20 offeres the core of the thriving <productname>Hadoop</productname> platform and many related packages. For a detailed review of Hadoop in Fedora, see <ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Changes/Hadoop" />
+ Fedora 20 offers the core of the thriving <productname>Hadoop</productname> platform and many related packages. For a detailed review of Hadoop in Fedora, see <ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Changes/Hadoop" />
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Desktop.xml b/en-US/Desktop.xml
index 4e28081..c7a98ff 100644
--- a/en-US/Desktop.xml
+++ b/en-US/Desktop.xml
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
<productname>X2Go</productname> is a featureful remote desktop solution based on NoMachine's now closed source <productname>NX</productname> project. X2Go packages allow Fedora 20 to work as a scalable server or versatile client. Entire desktop sessions can be paused and migrated, and the software supports audio and file transfers.
</para>
<note>
- <title>X2Go with accellerated desktops</title>
+ <title>X2Go with accelerated desktops</title>
<para>
X2Go may not start properly with 3D accelerated desktops like GNOME3. For best results, use a desktop environment that does not require acceleration.
</para>
@@ -84,13 +84,13 @@
Lock screen background customization.
</member>
<member>
- A new geolocation framework allows features like automatic timezone updates when travelling and location detection in <application>Maps</application>.
+ A new geolocation framework allows features like automatic timezone updates when traveling and location detection in <application>Maps</application>.
</member>
<member>
<application>GNOME Documents</application> support for <productname>OwnCloud</productname>
</member>
<member>
- Drag and drop files between your computer and a <application>Boxes</application> guest. Windows guests will need <ulink url="http://spice-space.org/download/windows/spice-guest-tools/" /> installed, and linux guests will need an updated version of spice-vdagent.
+ Drag and drop files between your computer and a <application>Boxes</application> guest. Windows guests will need <ulink url="http://spice-space.org/download/windows/spice-guest-tools/" /> installed, and Linux guests will need an updated version of spice-vdagent.
</member>
<member>
<application>Boxes</application> gains support for importing filesystem images.
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@
</itemizedlist>
<note>
<title>Nemopuk and upgrading</title>
- <para>Users upgrading to new versions of <application>Nemopuk</application> should expect their database to be automatically reindexed and upgraded. The conversion will consume more system resources than normal but will only occur on the first login after upgrading.
+ <para>Users upgrading to new versions of <application>Nemopuk</application> should expect their database to be automatically re-indexed and upgraded. The conversion will consume more system resources than normal but will only occur on the first login after upgrading.
</para>
</note>
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Development.xml b/en-US/Development.xml
index ec97c65..001e150 100644
--- a/en-US/Development.xml
+++ b/en-US/Development.xml
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
<section id="development-python-setuptools">
<title>python-setuptools updated</title>
<para>
- The version of the <productname>python-setuptools</productname> package has been updated to the 0.9.x series. This release series merges the <literal>setuptools</literal> and <literal>distribute</literal> upstream projects which has introduced a variety of changes to the API and behaviour.
+ The version of the <productname>python-setuptools</productname> package has been updated to the 0.9.x series. This release series merges the <literal>setuptools</literal> and <literal>distribute</literal> upstream projects which has introduced a variety of changes to the API and behavior.
</para>
<para>
Because this change is mostly compatible with the previous version, it should not impair any Python packages in the Fedora. If you are writing or deploying other Python software you suspect may be affected, please see <ulink url="http://pythonhosted.org/setuptools/merge.html" /> and <ulink url="https://pypi.python.org/pypi/setuptools#changes" /> for more details.
diff --git a/en-US/Development_GCC_Tools.xml b/en-US/Development_GCC_Tools.xml
index 53fa2b4..155746d 100644
--- a/en-US/Development_GCC_Tools.xml
+++ b/en-US/Development_GCC_Tools.xml
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
<primary>glibc</primary>
</indexterm>
<para>
- Fedora 20 ships version 2.18 of the GNU C Library. For information on this release, see the upstream release anouncement at <ulink url="https://sourceware.org/ml/libc-alpha/2013-08/msg00160.html" /> </para>
+ Fedora 20 ships version 2.18 of the GNU C Library. For information on this release, see the upstream release announcement at <ulink url="https://sourceware.org/ml/libc-alpha/2013-08/msg00160.html" /> </para>
</section>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/I18n.xml b/en-US/I18n.xml
index 1315354..5a4b075 100644
--- a/en-US/I18n.xml
+++ b/en-US/I18n.xml
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
</para>
</section>
<section id="i18n-fonttools">
- <title>Fonttools</title>
+ <title>Font tools</title>
<para>
<command>ttname</command> is a new CLI interface for editing the <literal>name</literal> table that contains the metadata in <productname>TrueType</productname> and <productname>OpenType</productname> fonts.
</para>
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
<productname>lohit-devanagari-fonts</productname> from lohit2 project by completely rewritten open type tables, support for both dev2 and deva.
</para>
<para>
- <productname>liberation-fonts</productname> with improved serbian locale support in it and minor bugfixes.
+ <productname>liberation-fonts</productname> with improved Serbian locale support in it and minor bugfixes.
</para>
</section>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Networking.xml b/en-US/Networking.xml
index d6484e0..c74cd40 100644
--- a/en-US/Networking.xml
+++ b/en-US/Networking.xml
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
<section id="networking-nm_bb">
<title>NetworkManager Bonding and Bridging</title>
<para>
- <productname>NetworkManager</productname> now supports expanded bonding and bridging functionality, and incorporates better with existing bonding or bridging tools and configurations. This allows greater interoperability with virtualization solitions like <productname>libvirt</productname>. Managed devices will not appear in configuration applets unless the applet suppoorts these device types.
+ <productname>NetworkManager</productname> now supports expanded bonding and bridging functionality, and incorporates better with existing bonding or bridging tools and configurations. This allows greater interoperability with virtualization solutions like <productname>libvirt</productname>. Managed devices will not appear in configuration applets unless the applet supports these device types.
</para>
<para>
Example configurations are available at <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Networking/Bridging" /> and <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Networking/Bonding" />
diff --git a/en-US/Virtualization.xml b/en-US/Virtualization.xml
index f32a798..31efd6a 100644
--- a/en-US/Virtualization.xml
+++ b/en-US/Virtualization.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
<section>
<title>QXL Modesetting Driver</title>
<para>
- Fedora &PRODVER; guests see improved graphics performace with the introduction of a new qxl kernel mode setting driver.
+ Fedora &PRODVER; guests see improved graphics performance with the introduction of a new QXL kernel mode setting driver.
</para>
</section>
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