[release-notes] Fix a typo, improve markup.

rkratky rkratky at fedoraproject.org
Sat Dec 6 09:01:32 UTC 2014


commit 3bcbfeb79d7c2507583ce982a332d18e87eeaf30
Author: Robert Krátký <rkratky at redhat.com>
Date:   Sat Dec 6 10:01:25 2014 +0100

    Fix a typo, improve markup.

 en-US/Desktop.xml |    6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Desktop.xml b/en-US/Desktop.xml
index dcf1c72..97f114e 100644
--- a/en-US/Desktop.xml
+++ b/en-US/Desktop.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
     <para>GNOME has been updated to the latest upstream release 3.14. This release comes with a number of feature improvements, some of which are listed below.</para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para>The GNOME Weather app has been redesigned for 3.14. It is now integrated with a new geolocation framework so that you don't have to manually specify your current geographical location.</para>
+        <para>The <application>GNOME Weather</application> app has been redesigned for 3.14. It is now integrated with a new geolocation framework so that you don't have to manually specify your current geographical location.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>The <application>Evince</application> app has been redesigned for 3.14.</para>
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
         <para>Wayland support has been improved in 3.14.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>The 3.14 release includes new and updated Human Interface Guidelines (HIG).</para>
+        <para>The 3.14 release includes new and updated Human Interface Guidelines (<acronym>HIG</acronym>).</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para><application>gnome-terminal</application> has been improved in 3.14. Developers and administrators alike use a lot of terminal sessions.  A new search provider for <application>GNOME Shell</application> makes navigating between multiple terminal windows quick and easy.  Just type into the overview to match running processes, ssh sessions, and more.
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
   <section id="desktop-KDE-4-14-and-SDDM">
     <title>KDE 4.14 and SDDM</title>
     <para>
-      The KDE Software Compilation&nbsp;4.14 (including the KDE Plasma Workspaces&nbsp;4.11), which is the version included in Fedora&nbsp;21, have already been made available to users of Fedora&nbsp;20 through the Updates repository. However, the KDE spin of Fedora now uses <application>SDDM</application> as its new default display manager. <application>KDM</application>, which was the default display manager on Fedora&nbsp;20 and earlier, is still available for installation from the Fedora repositories.
+      The KDE Software Compilation&nbsp;4.14 (including the KDE Plasma Workspaces&nbsp;4.11), which is the version included in Fedora&nbsp;21, has already been made available to users of Fedora&nbsp;20 through the Updates repository. However, the KDE spin of Fedora now uses <application>SDDM</application> as its new default display manager. <application>KDM</application>, which was the default display manager on Fedora&nbsp;20 and earlier, is still available for installation from the Fedora repositories.
     </para>
     <para>
       To return to using <application>KDM</application>, install the <package>kdm</package> package using the following command:


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