[install-guide/f21-branch] Small fixes in Preparing for Installation
pbokoc
pbokoc at fedoraproject.org
Mon Dec 8 14:10:01 UTC 2014
commit a8b62932f187eeb4c53b83bb642d38f84f6c101d
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc at redhat.com>
Date: Mon Dec 8 15:07:57 2014 +0100
Small fixes in Preparing for Installation
en-US/Preparing_for_Installation.xml | 55 ++++++++-------------------------
1 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 41 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Preparing_for_Installation.xml b/en-US/Preparing_for_Installation.xml
index d3d9b51..dce6a1a 100644
--- a/en-US/Preparing_for_Installation.xml
+++ b/en-US/Preparing_for_Installation.xml
@@ -9,13 +9,6 @@
This chapter describes the steps you need take before you begin the installation. Not every step must be strictly followed - for example, if you plan to use the default installation settings, you do not need to gather system information such as disk device labels/UUIDs or network information such as the system's IP address. However, you should still go through this chapter, as it also describes the available types of installation media and how to prepare boot media and installation sources.
</para>
- <section id="sect-preparing-supported-hardware">
- <title>Supported Hardware</title>
- <para>
- TODO
- </para>
- </section>
-
<section id="sect-preparing-upgrade-or-install">
<title>Upgrade or Install?</title>
<para>
@@ -46,23 +39,16 @@
</warning>
</section>
- <section id="sect-preparing-system-information">
- <title>Gathering System Information</title>
- <para>
- TODO
- </para>
- </section>
-
<section id="sect-preparing-obtaining-images">
<title>Downloading Boot and Installation Images</title>
<para>
- The Fedora Project offers different flavors for tailored for some specific use cases. Choose the Fedora flavor best for you, or you can build your own by customizing after the installation, or by using a kickstart file as described in <xref linkend="sect-kickstart-file-create" />.
+ The Fedora Project offers different flavors for tailored for some specific use cases. Choose the Fedora flavor best for you, or you can build your own by customizing after the installation, or by using a kickstart file as described in <xref linkend="sect-kickstart-file-create" />.
</para>
<para>
- Read more about Fedora Workstation, Fedora Cloud, Fedora Server and the available media types in <xref linkend="chap-downloading-fedora" />.
+ Read more about Fedora Workstation, Fedora Cloud, Fedora Server and the available media types in <xref linkend="chap-downloading-fedora" />.
</para>
<para>
- You can also choose a Fedora <literal>Spin</literal> featuring favorite alternative desktops or tools for specialized tasks at <ulink url="http://spins.fedoraproject.org" />
+ You can also choose a Fedora <literal>Spin</literal> featuring favorite alternative desktops or tools for specialized tasks at <ulink url="http://spins.fedoraproject.org" />
</para>
</section>
@@ -171,15 +157,7 @@ Mode LastWriteTime Length Name
</itemizedlist>
</step>
</procedure>
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
- </section>
+ </section>
<section id="sect-preparing-installation-methods">
<title>Choosing an Installation Method</title>
@@ -205,13 +183,13 @@ Mode LastWriteTime Length Name
Utilities that use a direct write method, and do not modify the Fedora image, will produce the most consistently successful results.
</para>
</important>
-
- <warning>
- <title>Be sure you choose the right device!</title>
- <para>
- Most media creation methods in this section are destructive. Ensure you do not need any data on the USB stick, and double check you have chosen the correct device before continuing.
- </para>
- </warning>
+ <warning>
+ <title>Be sure you choose the right device!</title>
+ <para>
+ Most media creation methods in this section are destructive. Ensure you do not need any data on the USB stick, and double check you have chosen the correct device before continuing.
+ </para>
+ </warning>
+
<procedure>
<title>Creating USB Media on Windows</title>
<step>
@@ -229,7 +207,7 @@ Mode LastWriteTime Length Name
Choose the USB device you wish to convert to installation media.
</para>
</step>
- <step>
+ <step>
<para>
Continue with media creation using the appropriate button. After a few minutes, it will report the process is complete and your installation media will be ready to use.
</para>
@@ -292,16 +270,11 @@ Mode LastWriteTime Length Name
Use the <command>dd</command> utility to write the image. <emphasis>Make sure you have the right drive!</emphasis>
</para>
<screen>
- <prompt># </prompt>dd if=<replaceable>/path/to/Fedora-Live-Security-x86_64-21.iso</replaceable> of=<replaceable>/dev/sdd</replaceable>
+<prompt>#</prompt> <command>dd if=<replaceable>/path/to/Fedora-Live-Security-x86_64-21.iso</replaceable> of=<replaceable>/dev/sdd</replaceable></command>
</screen>
</step>
</procedure>
-
-
-
-
-
- </section>
+ </section>
<section id="sect-preparing-installation-sources">
<title>Preparing Installation Sources</title>
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