[install-guide/f21-branch: 2/32] Small fixes in NetworkSpoke

pbokoc pbokoc at fedoraproject.org
Tue Dec 9 17:30:34 UTC 2014


commit 23e36efe208f98990bc39d811866cd98787e6344
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc at redhat.com>
Date:   Wed Dec 3 14:52:01 2014 +0100

    Small fixes in NetworkSpoke

 en-US/NetworkSpoke_EditConnection.xml |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/NetworkSpoke_EditConnection.xml b/en-US/NetworkSpoke_EditConnection.xml
index bddf74d..c260489 100644
--- a/en-US/NetworkSpoke_EditConnection.xml
+++ b/en-US/NetworkSpoke_EditConnection.xml
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
                     In the <guilabel>General</guilabel> tab of the configuration dialog, you can select or unselect the <guilabel>Automatically connect to this network when it is available</guilabel> check box to allow or disallow this connection to connect by default. When enabled on a wired connection, this means the system will typically connect during startup (unless you unplug the network cable); on a wireless connection, it means that the interface will attempt to connect to any known wireless networks in range.
                 </para>
                 <para>
-                    Additionally, you can allow or disallow all users on the system from connecting to this network using the <guilabel>All users may connect to this network</guilabel> tab. If you disable this option, only <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> will be able to connect to this network.
+                    Additionally, you can allow or disallow all users on the system from connecting to this network using the <guilabel>All users may connect to this network</guilabel> option. If you disable this option, only <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> will be able to connect to this network.
                 </para>
                 <note>
                     <para>
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
             <term>Set up static IPv4 or IPv6 settings</term>
             <listitem>
                 <para>
-                    By default, both <systemitem class="protocol">IPv4</systemitem> and <systemitem class="protocol">IPv6</systemitem> are set to automatic configuration depending on current network settings. This means that addresses such as the local IP address, DNS address, and other settings will be detected automatically each time the interface connects to a network. In many cases, this is sufficient, but you can also provide static configuration in the <guilabel>IPv4 Settings</guilabel> and <guilabel>IPv6</guilabel> settings, respectively.
+                    By default, both <systemitem class="protocol">IPv4</systemitem> and <systemitem class="protocol">IPv6</systemitem> are set to automatic configuration depending on current network settings. This means that addresses such as the local IP address, DNS address, and other settings will be detected automatically each time the interface connects to a network. In many cases, this is sufficient, but you can also provide static configuration in the <guilabel>IPv4 Settings</guilabel> and <guilabel>IPv6 Settings</guilabel>, respectively.
                 </para>
                 <para>
                     To set static network configuration, navigate to one of the settings tabs and select a method other than <guilabel>Automatic</guilabel> (for example, <guilabel>Manual</guilabel>) from the <guilabel>Method</guilabel> drop-down menu. This will enable the <guilabel>Addresses</guilabel> field below. 


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