[fedora-cookbook] master: minor corrections, bumping revhistory (554e3bd)

[immanetize at fedoraproject.org]

Repository : http://git.fedorahosted.org/cgit/docs/fedora-cookbook.git

On branch  : master

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commit 554e3bd7b9814aaf5ebc85196edebd5bacb51db0
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Fri Mar 21 20:53:01 2014 -0400

    minor corrections, bumping revhistory


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 en-US/Author_Group.xml                       |    9 ++++-----
 en-US/Book_Info.xml                          |    6 +++---
 en-US/Documenting_Fedora/writing_recipes.xml |    2 +-
 en-US/Revision_History.xml                   |   17 ++++++++---------
 4 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en-US/Author_Group.xml b/en-US/Author_Group.xml
index 3b0d59e..5329903 100644
--- a/en-US/Author_Group.xml
+++ b/en-US/Author_Group.xml
@@ -5,13 +5,12 @@
 ]>
 <authorgroup>
 	<author>
-		<firstname>Enter your first name here.</firstname>
-		<surname>Enter your surname here.</surname>
+		<firstname>Pete</firstname>
+		<surname>Travis</surname>
 		<affiliation>
-			<orgname>Enter your organisation's name here.</orgname>
-			<orgdiv>Enter your organisational division here.</orgdiv>
+			<orgname>Fedora Project</orgname>
 		</affiliation>
-		<email>Enter your email address here.</email>
+		<email>immanetize AT fedoraproject.org</email>
 	</author>
 </authorgroup>
 
diff --git a/en-US/Book_Info.xml b/en-US/Book_Info.xml
index 5e5f8fa..474f102 100644
--- a/en-US/Book_Info.xml
+++ b/en-US/Book_Info.xml
@@ -5,14 +5,14 @@
 ]>
 <bookinfo id="book-Documentation-Fedora_Cookbook-Fedora_Cookbook">
 	<title>Fedora Cookbook</title>
-	<subtitle>Enter a short description here.</subtitle>
+	<subtitle>A collection of tutorials for Fedora</subtitle>
 	<productname>Documentation</productname>
 	<productnumber>0.1</productnumber>
 	<edition>0</edition>
 	<pubsnumber>0</pubsnumber>
 	<abstract>
-		<para>
-			A short overview and summary of the book's subject and purpose, traditionally no more than one paragraph long. Note: the abstract will appear in the front matter of your book and will also be placed in the description field of the book's RPM spec file.
+    <para>
+      The Fedora Cookbook contains a collection of tutorials and short guides. The book is designed to encourage community participation; submissions are welcome and the Fedora Docs community provides review and pubishing. If you would like an addition to this guide, you can request or get help to write it.
 		</para>
 	</abstract>
 	<corpauthor>
diff --git a/en-US/Documenting_Fedora/writing_recipes.xml b/en-US/Documenting_Fedora/writing_recipes.xml
index d7fa2e6..e6653d2 100644
--- a/en-US/Documenting_Fedora/writing_recipes.xml
+++ b/en-US/Documenting_Fedora/writing_recipes.xml
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
       </para></step>
       <step>
         <para>
-          Download a template from <ulink url="https://git.fedorahosted.org/cgit/docs/fedora-cookbook.git/tree/en-US/examples">the repository</ulink> maintained by the Fedora Docs team. Choose the format you like, then click <guilabel>plain<guilabel> to get it in a format you can cut and paste into an editor.
+          Download a template from <ulink url="https://git.fedorahosted.org/cgit/docs/fedora-cookbook.git/tree/en-US/examples">the repository</ulink> maintained by the Fedora Docs team. Choose the format you like, then click <guilabel>plain</guilabel> to get it in a format you can cut and paste into an editor.
         </para>
         <itemizedlist>
           <listitem>
diff --git a/en-US/Revision_History.xml b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
index cea54f3..66a49bf 100644
--- a/en-US/Revision_History.xml
+++ b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
@@ -1,27 +1,26 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
 <!DOCTYPE appendix PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
-<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Fedora_Cookbook.ent">
-%BOOK_ENTITIES;
 ]>
 <appendix id="appe-Documentation-Fedora_Cookbook-Revision_History">
 	<title>Revision History</title>
-	<simpara>
+	 <simpara>
 		<revhistory>
 			<revision>
-				<revnumber>0.0-0</revnumber>
-				<date>Fri Mar 21 2014</date>
+				<revnumber>0.0-1</revnumber>
+				<date>Sat Mar 22 2014</date>
 				<author>
-					<firstname>Enter your first name here.</firstname>
-					<surname>Enter your surname here.</surname>
-					<email>Enter your email address here.</email>
+					<firstname>Pete</firstname>
+					<surname>Travis</surname>
+					<email>immanetize AT fedoraproject.org</email>
 				</author>
 				<revdescription>
 					<simplelist>
-						<member>Initial creation by publican</member>
+						<member>member</member>
 					</simplelist>
 				</revdescription>
 			</revision>
 		</revhistory>
+
 	</simpara>
 </appendix>