[release-notes] Amended the entry for Improved Ivy Packaging.

[Simon Clark]

commit 71e4fdd487d3ebbbeeadd7aac9a4d883ab817719
Author: Simon Clark <simon.richard.clark at gmail.com>
Date:   Wed Oct 29 12:29:42 2014 +0000

    Amended the entry for Improved Ivy Packaging.

 en-US/Development_Java.xml |   13 +++++--------
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Development_Java.xml b/en-US/Development_Java.xml
index 03e82ab..274211a 100644
--- a/en-US/Development_Java.xml
+++ b/en-US/Development_Java.xml
@@ -52,14 +52,11 @@
   </section>
   <section id="improved-ivy-packaging">
     <title>Improved Ivy Packaging</title>
-    <para>This change aims to improve the process for packaging
-    Java software that uses Apache Ivy to manage build
-    dependencies. Currently, it is packaged manually. Dependencies
-    must be symlinked manually, all files have to be explicitly
-    installed and there are no auto-requires. This change intends
-    to simplify Ivy packaging in a similar way to that which was
-    done for Maven packaging. In particular, the following
-    improvements have been implemented:</para>
+    <para>The way of packaging Java software that uses Apache Ivy
+    to manage build dependencies has been improved in a similar way
+    to the Maven packaging updates in previous Fedora releases. In
+    particular, the following improvements have been
+    implemented:</para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>automatic resolution of Ivy artifacts,</para>