[system-administrators-guide/22] Typos and style updates

stephenw stephenw at fedoraproject.org
Tue Jun 9 20:21:26 UTC 2015


commit 7b776b0b35cb1e0feef7c878e45fb85a3ab1d780
Author: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley at redhat.com>
Date:   Wed Jun 3 23:58:24 2015 +0200

    Typos and style updates

 en-US/OpenSSH.xml |    9 ++++-----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/OpenSSH.xml b/en-US/OpenSSH.xml
index 1b8e0b2..a5b19ba 100644
--- a/en-US/OpenSSH.xml
+++ b/en-US/OpenSSH.xml
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@
     </section>
   </section>
   <section id="s1-ssh-configuration">
-    <title>An OpenSSH Configuration</title>
+    <title>Configuring OpenSSH</title>
     <para>
       In order to perform tasks described in this section, you must have superuser privileges. To obtain them, log in as <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> by typing: 
     </para>
@@ -492,7 +492,7 @@
       <note>
         <title>Make sure you have relevant packages installed</title>
         <para>
-          To run an OpenSSH server, you must have the <package>openssh-server</package> package installed. See <xref linkend="sec-Installing" /> for more information on how to install new packages in &MAJOROS;.
+          To run an OpenSSH server, you must have the <package>openssh-server</package> package installed. See <xref linkend="sec-Installing" /> for more information on how to install new packages in &MAJOROSVER;.
         </para>
       </note>
       <indexterm>
@@ -658,7 +658,6 @@ The key's randomart image is:
               By default, the permissions of the <filename class="directory">~/.ssh/</filename> directory are set to <literal>rwx------</literal> or <literal>700</literal> expressed in octal notation. This is to ensure that only the <replaceable>USER</replaceable> can view the contents. If required, this can be confirmed with the following command:
             </para>
             <screen>~]$&nbsp;<command>ls -ld ~/.ssh</command>
-            ~]$ ls -ld ~/.ssh/
 drwx------. 2 USER USER 54 Nov 25 16:56 /home/USER/.ssh/</screen>
           </step>
           <step>
@@ -1397,7 +1396,7 @@ where <replaceable>integer</replaceable> is the line number.
     <note>
       <title>Make sure you have relevant packages installed</title>
       <para>
-        To connect to an OpenSSH server from a client machine, you must have the <package>openssh-clients</package> package installed. See <xref linkend="sec-Installing" /> for more information on how to install new packages in &MAJOROS;.
+        To connect to an OpenSSH server from a client machine, you must have the <package>openssh-clients</package> package installed. See <xref linkend="sec-Installing" /> for more information on how to install new packages in &MAJOROSVER;.
       </para>
     </note>
     <section id="s2-ssh-clients-ssh">
@@ -1453,7 +1452,7 @@ USER at penguin.example.com's password:</screen>
         </para>
         <para>
           To remove a key from the <filename>~/.ssh/known_hosts</filename> file, issue a command as follows:
-          <screen>~]#&nbsp;<command>ssh-keygen</command><option>-R</option><replaceable>penguin.example.com</replaceable>
+          <screen>~]#&nbsp;<command>ssh-keygen</command> <option>-R</option> <replaceable>penguin.example.com</replaceable>
 # Host penguin.example.com found: line 15 type ECDSA
 /home/USER/.ssh/known_hosts updated.
 Original contents retained as /home/USER/.ssh/known_hosts.old</screen>


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