Overview: Rewrite

[Paul W. Frields]

On Wed, 2007-10-17 at 10:51 +0630, Rahul Sundaram wrote:
> Hi
> 
> http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Overview page needs a rewrite. Does any of 
> the word smiths here help out with that?
> 
> Details at
> 
> http://marc.info/?l=fedora-marketing-list&m=118136110006398&w=2

I only had time to make trivial changes tonight -- please keep in mind
that the word "free" is not capitalized in these use cases.

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