Btrfs and SSSD in Fedora 13 feature profiles: Review

[Paul W. Frields]

On Wed, May 12, 2010 at 07:04:57PM -0400, Gerard Ryan wrote:
> On 12/05/10 13:12, Rahul Sundaram wrote:
> > Hi,
> > 
> > As you might have noticed, the marketing team has been doing a few
> > feature profiles covering various new features in Fedora 13,  the last
> > ones remaining are one of Btrfs and SSSD
> > 
> > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Btrfs_in_Fedora_13
> > 
> > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/SSSD_in_Fedora_13
> > 
> > So, take a quick look and let me if you have any suggestions on
> > improving it.  Documentation folks -  appreciate you review as well.  We
> > would like to send it out to the press in a couple of days. 
> > 
> > Rahul
> 
> Hi Rahul,
> 
> I read the Btrfs interview, and I noted the following:
> 
> 1.
> 'So right before doing a big yum update our plugin we'll take a snapshot
> of the filesystem, now you have two copies of the filesystem, and then
> yum does its update onto your original volume.'
> 
> --I would suggest adding a comma after 'big yum update,' (for
> readability) and change 'we'll' to 'will' ('we'll' seems to be a typo
> there).
> 
> 
> 2.
> 'How many developers are working on Btrfs full time and from Red Hat?
> What do they focus on?'
> 
> --Either remove 'and' or say 'How many developers from Red Hat are
> working on Btrfs full time?'
> 
> 
> 3.
> 'Is there any features that ZFS has that Btrfs does not at this point?'
> 
> --Needs to be: 'Are there any features that ZFS has that Btrfs does not
> at this point?'
> 
> 
> I hope this has been helpful. Obviously there might be other things that
> I missed also.
> 
> Gerard.

Gerard,

If you have a Fedora account already, you can actually make these
edits yourself.  The wonderful thing about a wiki is that it
encourages collaboration like this directly on the document.  You
don't need to ask for permission to make improvements.  And the
changes you make are recorded in a history record, so if there's any
problem, it's easy to find and correct it.

Thanks for participating and reviewing!

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