Release Notes RPM status

Tue Jun 25 23:36:32 UTC 2013

Some people on the Documentation project don't like have proof reading done. SO, my last bugzilla posting about proof read is the last that I have done, since there is no appreciation given for the effort.

Writing is a very tough assignment, A proof reader has to do QA on the text, and ensure that the language is global. For example, American English is not fully global. 

So here below again is a brief response to the latest topic.  

Just a congratulations for a great release note 

Here is a comment for web page http://fedorapeople.org/groups/docs/release-notes/en-US/sect-Release_Notes-Changes_for_Sysadmin.html

For a first time user, or a system administrator new to Fedora, He will ask "what is a kickstart" file.  Perhaps there should be a reference to its construction or how it is used. It is an idea for Fedora 20.

In section 2.3.1 
inside the box, previously we had in bold "dracut --regenerate-all 
--force".  Being bold made it a good eye-catcher.  Any chance bold it?

Ignore my yesterday's 
comment about boost. Yesterday the links to boost libraries produced 
a 404 error (no host). Today that server is up and the links are 
satisfied. 

2.8.1. MariaDB
Fedora 19 features MariaDB, an improved and more open fork of MySQL with a thriving community.  

The "with a thriving community" should be removed.  Does "thriving community" refer to MySQL or to MariaDB? 

In the 4.2.3. MEMSTOMP section, what is DSO?  The only idea I came up with was "Dynamic Storage Optimization". 

The notes that I reviewed today are really in good shape. Now to review the french versions. (grin)

 Leslie

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>________________________________
> From: Adam Williamson <awilliam at redhat.com>
>To: Jérôme Fenal <jfenal at gmail.com> 
>Cc: For participants of the Documentation Project <docs at lists.fedoraproject.org> 
>Sent: Tuesday, June 25, 2013 3:24 AM
>Subject: Re: Release Notes RPM status
> 
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>On Tue, 2013-06-25 at 09:22 +0200, Jérôme Fenal wrote:
>> 2013/6/25 Pete Travis <me at petetravis.com>:
>> >
>> > On Jun 25, 2013 12:46 AM, "Adam Williamson" <awilliam at redhat.com> wrote:
>> >>
>> >> Welcome Petr!
>> >>
>> >> I just realized we sent F19 Final RC1 out but I forgot to check in with
>> >> docs team if you were planning to have a newer fedora-release-notes
>> >> package in the final release. Is fedora-release-notes-19-0.12 - the
>> >> current stable build - okay to go out in the release? Or do we need
>> >> another build? Thanks!
>> 
>> Welcome Petr, hi all,
>> 
>> FYI, French translations have been updated and are now back at 100% completion.
>> 
>> I'll ask for a last proofreading from the list today, for the strings
>> not yet proofread.
>
>Thanks folks. Just to let you know we're on a very tight deadline here:
>go/no-go is thursday, we really need a build by tomorrow. sorry I didn't
>check in to co-ordinate this earlier.
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