gut check - Fedora Multiboot Guide

[Leslie S Satenstein]

Good thorough job that Roger has done. He is to be congratulated.


May I make two (only two, he writes well) suggestions?


6. Multiboot on BIOS SystemsAlternative title  6 Multiboot on systems based on BIOS startup code

7. Multiboot on UEFI Systems
Alternative title   7 Multiboot on systems based on UEFI startup code
 
Regards 

 Leslie

Mr. Leslie Satenstein
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> From: Pete Travis <me at petetravis.com>
>To: adamwill at fedoraproject.org 
>Cc: For participants of the Documentation Project <docs at lists.fedoraproject.org> 
>Sent: Saturday, October 4, 2014 3:30 PM
>Subject: gut check - Fedora Multiboot Guide
> 
>
>Hey Adam,
>
>I've been working with Roger,  a new Fedora Docs contributor, on a
>Fedora Multiboot Guide[1]. 
>
>Although the work definitely needs to be structured, there is a solid
>draft now, and your expertise would really be appreciated.  Would you
>please skim it over for glaring misconceptions or omissions?
>
>[1] https://fedorapeople.org/groups/docs/multiboot-guide/
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