A editing of the draft multiboot document, a very fine guide

Sun Oct 5 21:12:01 UTC 2014

I lifted the document from the website and pasted the contents into a libreoffice odt file. I used markups and comments to highlight some spelling errors and some improvements to sentence construction.

That document is accessable from this link. The author (Roger) produced a fine first pass. Congratulations Roger.

The link to fetch it is 

 https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/42050559/Grub%20Multiboot%20Edit%20in%20process.odt

Regards 

 Leslie
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