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Stephen Gallagher sgallagh at redhat.com
Mon Jul 7 15:25:37 UTC 2014


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On 07/07/2014 11:12 AM, Ruth Suehle wrote:
> Just email me the typos, or I can give you access to WP if you want
> to fix them.
> 

Front page:

"Flock, now it its second year" should be "*in* its second year".


Also, the font choice makes ! (exclamation point) look like an 'l'
(ell) or 1 (one) in many places.




Schedule:
"The first day, this year it’s Wednesday, is devoted to the opening
keynote and talks."

would read better as:

"The first day, Wednesday the 6th, is comprised of the keynotes
followed by talks."



Location:
"The conference will be held at Czech Technical University in Prague
campus at Dejvice in buildings of Faculty of Civil Engineering
(lecture rooms) and Faculty of Information Technology (workshop
rooms)." (missing the article "the" before all of the nouns)



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