Fedora 9 Release Party Flyer Help
Máirín Duffy
duffy at fedoraproject.org
Wed Apr 16 19:15:27 UTC 2008
Michelle Thompson wrote:
> I have one small suggestion. and then an even smaller
> suggestion/comment. :)
>
> 1) after the word 'release' in that middle paragraph, i think you meant
> a comma to separate and not a period
+1 this was a typo i totally missed
>
> now, for a very tiny, subjective comment that you can totally ignore if
> you want to:
> 2) perhaps we ditch the exclamation after release party in the very top
> title?
yeh i agree! it's too excited! too much coffeee! (took it out :) )
~m
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