Fedora 9 Release Party Flyer Help

Máirín Duffy duffy at fedoraproject.org
Wed Apr 16 19:15:27 UTC 2008

Michelle Thompson wrote:
> I have one small suggestion. and then an even smaller 
> suggestion/comment. :)
> 1) after the word 'release' in that middle paragraph, i think you meant 
> a comma to separate and not a period

+1 this was a typo i totally missed
> now, for a very tiny, subjective comment that you can totally ignore if 
> you want to:
> 2) perhaps we ditch the exclamation after release party in the very top 
> title?

yeh i agree! it's too excited! too much coffeee! (took it out :) )


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