Marketing flyer updated in English

[Larry Cafiero]

I have a request for whomever is doing the flier, and it's a very minor one.

You'll notice on

https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Marketing_Fedora_flyer#Flyer_A4_landscape_english

that the text is justified and, on some lines where there are long words,
there are huge gaps between words.

Just a suggestion: Flush left, ragged right for text works wonders here.

Larry Cafiero

2010/4/8 Robyn Bergeron <robyn.bergeron at gmail.com>

> 2010/4/8 Pierros Papadeas <ppapadeas at gmail.com>:
> > On Thu, Apr 8, 2010 at 9:14 PM, Max Spevack <mspevack at fedoraproject.org>
> wrote:
> >> In preparation for Texas Linux Fest, I made a few minor updates to the
> >> Marketing flyer, which was (as I understand it) started by Pierros for
> >> our Greek Ambassadors, and is a great piece of work.
> >>
> >>
> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Marketing_Fedora_flyer#Flyer_A4_landscape_english
> >>
> >> I'd give the current grade of this flyer a B.  Why not an A?  Because I
> >> think it could use something more than the cursory review that I gave it
> >> to ensure that it's more on-message, and maybe the once-over from the
> >> design team as well.
> >>
> >> I understand the value of a generally-release-independent flyer,
> >> especially if we take the time to design it nicely and we want to use it
> >> for a year or two without making huge changes.
> >>
> >> Anyway, I think the current version will serve our needs for TLF.  I
> >> just wonder what we'd like this to look like a month from now when F13
> >> lands.
> >
> > Couldn't agree more with Max, this flyer need a lot of freshness. It
> > has well fulfilled it purpose and we should work on a new one.
> >
> > I shall try make a mock-up for a new one, I am thinking something like
> > fedora-one-page-release-notes on a flyer-printable format.
> > More pictures, more fun, more fedora!
>
> This may have already been done - mizmo may know?
>
>
> >
> > ~π
> >
> >
> > --
> > Pierros Papadeas
> > PGP key: 0x6130DBF8
> > http://pierros.papadeas.gr
> > pierros at papadeas.gr
> > liknus @ GRnet , Freenode
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