F14 Beta announcement - Needs eyeballs!

[Larry Cafiero]

Robyn and others --

I made some very minor edits that are all around tightening up the text (for
example, "join us in blah blah blah" as opposed to "join us and participate
. . . ." and things like that), but otherwise the page is great. +1 to
Robyn.

Larry

On Tue, Sep 28, 2010 at 7:36 AM, Larry Cafiero <larry.cafiero at gmail.com>wrote:

> Best line:
>
> ''Fedora 14 / Beta is for Carotene / Let's Push for Final!''
>
> Did you come up with that one, Robyn?
>
> Larry Cafiero
>
>
> On Tue, Sep 28, 2010 at 7:18 AM, Jared K. Smith <jsmith at fedoraproject.org>wrote:
>
>> On Tue, Sep 28, 2010 at 1:11 AM, Robyn Bergeron
>> <robyn.bergeron at gmail.com> wrote:
>> > I've written up the Beta announcement, attempting to breathe a little
>> > bit of life into it so it's not a carbon copy of the F13 announcement:
>>
>> Yay!
>>
>> > I would love some feedback and eyeballs ASAP, particularly around the
>> > features (especially Spice!) to make sure I haven't goofed anything
>> > up. If you want to polish, feel free to do that as well. :)
>>
>> I took a look at it, and am very happy with the way it turned out.
>>
>> > ALSO: I really, really need to figure out how / where to get / make
>> > the referral links.
>>
>> Mike McGrath pointed me to
>> http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Link_tracking, which has all the
>> relevant data.
>>
>> > (On that note, it'd be useful to know if we did anything as far as
>> > looking at the referral links we utilized last time around; if nobody
>> > is doing anything with that, we should figure out how to do something
>> > with it, at least figure out if we have procured any interesting
>> > information that way as far as where our traffic is coming from.)
>>
>> Good point!
>>
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