EPEL6 announcement feedback

[Kevin Fenzi]

On Tue, 18 Jan 2011 08:32:50 -0800
Christopher Aillon <caillon at redhat.com> wrote:

> > The collection of EPEL 6 packages is a complementary and compatible
> > add-on repository for RHEL 6 or compatible rebuilds.  It provides
> > additional packages and does not replace any RHEL 6 packages.  EPEL
> > is a community project, maintained and supported by volunteers via
> > Bugzilla and mailing lists.  It is part of the Fedora Project and is
> > not commercially supported by Red Hat.
> 
> 
> We should use "supplementary" instead of "complementary". There's a 
> subtle difference in the meanings: the former connotes that a thing
> is additional to the whole, whereas the latter connotes that the
> whole is not complete without the thing.
> 
> Also, "Red Hat, Inc."?

Reasonable. I have made those changes. 

I also have the current revision up at: 
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Kevin/EPEL6_Announce_Draft
if folks would like to further edit or suggest changes. 

Thanks!

kevin
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