F19 Video Final Review

nitesh narayan lal niteshnarayanlalleo at gmail.com
Mon Jul 1 01:58:27 UTC 2013

Thanks for your feedback, that is the reason I need some help here
atleast with the text what I am using.
So that it could be made grammar and language error free.
Please let me know if anyone could provide me the text story which
could fit in the video.

On 6/30/13, Matthew Miller <mattdm at fedoraproject.org> wrote:
> On Sun, Jun 30, 2013 at 08:57:09AM -0400, Ruth Suehle wrote:
>> I still would prefer we avoid the weird Star Wars mixed metaphor with the
>> person in IRC hunting the cat... there's a lot going on here. I'm also
>> not
>> certain Robyn would be all that excited about being Princess Robyn. We
>> definitely can't say "Red Heat fighters."
> On that same page, it appears that there's some bit about 'rebel
> contributors' who apparently tried to steal Fedora's plans and put bugs in
> the kernel. I know it's meant to be funny, but I don't think we should
> promote a story of _internal_ conflict. If it's going to go with the Star
> Wars theme, we should all be the "rebels" together.
> There are also a lot of grammar and language errors. I know that we have a
> global contributor base and English isn't everyone's first language, but
> for
> an official video, we should make sure it is polished.
> --
> Matthew Miller  ☁☁☁  Fedora Cloud Architect  ☁☁☁
> <mattdm at fedoraproject.org>

Nitesh Narayan Lal

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