Final release announcement coordination
jzb at redhat.com
Tue Dec 2 17:00:17 UTC 2014
On 12/02/2014 10:49 AM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> As you guys are crafting improved notes, for better consistency, it
> would be great to write in present tense about the release.
> INCONSISTENT: "Fedora 21 Foobar will include special flavor crystals
> that defy gravity and help you fly like Superman."
> CONSISTENT: "Fedora 21 Foobar includes special flavor crystals that
> defy gravity and help you fly like Superman."
Be sure to use passive voice too. Paul likes that.
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