User focussed material for F21

[Joe Brockmeier]

On 01/12/2015 11:15 AM, Ankur Sinha wrote:
> On Mon, 2015-01-12 at 09:54 -0500, Joe Brockmeier wrote:
>> Sounds great.
> 
> I'll start working on this too.
> 
> 
> Would anyone have any other feedback on the workstation flyer, or should
> I remove the draft sign and put it up on the wiki if it's all OK?
> 
> https://fedorahosted.org/marketing-team/ticket/186

Why is the email on the front of the flyer for marketing@ instead of the
desktop@ mailing list?

"That's probably why Fedora has been called the best of HiDPI" -- by
whom? Some sort of reference there would probably be good.

On p2, I'd try to get rid of the hyphenation.

A little more text on DevAssistant would be good.

"And because the future of installations is not optical discs..."

<- I'm assuming this is talking about creating USB images from Fedora.
It may be confusing if users are on Mac OS X or Windows going to Linux.

"With the ability to run HTML5 web services in a chromeless window"

How do I use this feature?

Best,

jzb
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Joe Brockmeier | Principal Cloud & Storage Analyst
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