User focussed material for F21

[Ankur Sinha]

On Mon, 2015-01-12 at 18:24 -0500, Joe Brockmeier wrote:
> Why is the email on the front of the flyer for marketing@ instead of
> the
> desktop@ mailing list?

Good question. Well, mktg because we made the flyer, not the desktop
because that list is more for development, I think? I could change this
either to desktop or the users list, which is where troubleshooting
questions go. What do you think? I could ask the workstation folks what
they prefer too. 

> 
> "That's probably why Fedora has been called the best of HiDPI" -- by
> whom? Some sort of reference there would probably be good.

The entire text is taken from the workstation release announcement -
verbatim:
http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F21_release_announcement#Fedora_21_Workstation

The discussion about it here suggested that Phoronix not be mentioned:
https://lists.fedoraproject.org/pipermail/desktop/2014-September/010587.html

> 
> On p2, I'd try to get rid of the hyphenation.

I'll look into this. (LaTeX handles hyphenation itself.)

> 
> A little more text on DevAssistant would be good.

Sure. 

> 
> "And because the future of installations is not optical discs..."
> 
> <- I'm assuming this is talking about creating USB images from Fedora.
> It may be confusing if users are on Mac OS X or Windows going to
> Linux.

Well, this flyer isn't exactly for the novice user. It's targeted at the
audience that the workstation folks picked, which is more devs. I can
remove the line completely, it doesn't really contribute much IMHO. 

> 
> "With the ability to run HTML5 web services in a chromeless window"
> 
> How do I use this feature?

Well, it's via gnome-software and epiphany - I haven't really been able
to find an official documentation page for this, which is probably why
there isn't a link anywhere that this is mentioned. I'll look harder. An
explanation will require a lot more space. This seems to be the best
description at the moment:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Web_(web_browser)#Web_Applications_mode

Almost everything else that I find is a blog post someone has made. 

Thanks for the feedback. I'll make some changes and post an updated
version asap.
-- 
Thanks,
Regards,
Ankur Sinha "FranciscoD"

http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Ankursinha
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