User focussed material for F21

[Paul W. Frields]

On Mon, Jan 12, 2015 at 06:24:43PM -0500, Joe Brockmeier wrote:
> On 01/12/2015 11:15 AM, Ankur Sinha wrote:
> > On Mon, 2015-01-12 at 09:54 -0500, Joe Brockmeier wrote:
> >> Sounds great.
> > 
> > I'll start working on this too.
> > 
> > 
> > Would anyone have any other feedback on the workstation flyer, or should
> > I remove the draft sign and put it up on the wiki if it's all OK?
> > 
> > https://fedorahosted.org/marketing-team/ticket/186
> 
> Why is the email on the front of the flyer for marketing@ instead of the
> desktop@ mailing list?
> 
> "That's probably why Fedora has been called the best of HiDPI" -- by
> whom? Some sort of reference there would probably be good.

This was raised in an earlier thread.  It's paraphrased from a
Phoronix article originally becuase some folks objected to quoting
them directly.

> On p2, I'd try to get rid of the hyphenation.
> 
> A little more text on DevAssistant would be good.
> 
> "And because the future of installations is not optical discs..."
> 
> <- I'm assuming this is talking about creating USB images from Fedora.
> It may be confusing if users are on Mac OS X or Windows going to Linux.
> 
> "With the ability to run HTML5 web services in a chromeless window"
> 
> How do I use this feature?
> 
> Best,
> 
> jzb
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