Pending Post Review: Fedora 22 Intel Graphics Woes : Here's some help

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captions looks good :)

On Mon, Jun 15, 2015 at 10:44 AM, Ryan Lerch <rlerch at redhat.com> wrote:

>  Hi Sumit!
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> First up, thanks for submitting your first post to the Fedora Magazine. I
> have done a quick review of your post, and here are a few ideas /
> suggestions from me. (other editors, feel free to pitch in ideas too)
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> First up, i'd probably be a bit more direct and informative with the
> title, instead of  "Fedora 22 Intel Graphics Woes : Here's some help"
> maybe something like "Solution for graphics issues on some Intel graphics
> chipsets in Fedora 22" (just a suggestion, feel free to change and or edit
> too :) )
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> Secondly, i'd probably remove the majority of the first paragraph and lead
> with the issue itself (your third paragraph) -- most people get to the
> magazine via third party links, so starting with the info they came for
> always works well. I'm thinking something like:
> """
> Fedora 22 was [link to release annonce on fedora mag]released
> recently[/link], and if you are using a Pre-Sandybridge era Intel-based
> graphics chipset (For example, Intel 4 series motherboards with G41 chipset
> and GMA X4500 graphics), chances are that you might be facing graphics
> issues like shown in below screenshot on Fedora 22.
> [screenshot]
> """
>
> Then after the screenshot, have your brief description of the problem,
> covering the points that fedora switched to a new accel method that doesnt
> work so well with older chipsets.
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> Then put the solution. I found the bug for this issue (
> https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1226743) which might be worth
> mentioning. And there updated kernels (kernel-4.0.5-300.fc22 and
> kernel-4.0.5-200.fc21) that fix this issue is already in updates-testing,
> so it is probably a better solution to recommend that people install the
> new package with the fix from updates testing, or wait for the package to
> hit the proper repos (rather than editing a config file that they may
> forget about and cause them issues in the future.)
>
> cheers,
> ryanlerch
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