[Magazine] Article Edited and Ready for Final Review

[Sylvia Sánchez]

Agree with William. If we're going to change something let's ask Neville
first.



Cheers,
Sylvia


On Sunday, 7 February 2016, William Moreno <williamjmorenor at gmail.com>
wrote:

> CC Neville, it is his interview, I do not feel good to change something
> and do not ask him
> El 07/02/2016 14:51, "Justin W. Flory" <jflory7 at gmail.com
> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','jflory7 at gmail.com');>> escribió:
>
>> On 02/07/2016 11:32 AM, charles profitt wrote:
>> > I just finished editing the Neville Cross article. I want to thank both
>> > Neville and William Moreno for working on the article; excellent work
>> > gentlemen.
>> >
>> > Here is the link to the article for final review before publication.
>> > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=11601&preview_id=11601
>>
>> Overall, the article looks excellent to me as well. Thanks to all
>> involved in putting this article together! Thanks Neville, William, and
>> Charles. :)
>>
>> I only have one lingering thought on this article -- in the last section
>> about Software, there are some pretty sharp words said about GNOME.
>> While I completely agree that constructive criticism is important and it
>> is a good thing to voice concerns, I don't feel like this Magazine
>> article is the best place to do it.
>>
>> Instead of focusing on the negatives of GNOME, I would try to replace it
>> with some positive thoughts either on the desktop or another
>> environment. Using positive words over the negative will have a more
>> resounding impact on the reader and will also reflect well on Fedora.
>> Since there is such a large readership base for the Magazine, I could
>> imagine someone reading the last bit and thinking, "Oh, even Fedora
>> contributors don't even like Fedora!" Obviously this isn't true if you
>> read the rest of the article, but it can be easy for someone who is
>> skimming to take things out of context.
>>
>> However, like I said, overall, I think this is a fantastic article and
>> is a great testament to the Fedora community. With a little bit of
>> rephrasing to the bottom portion, I think this article will be ready to
>> ship on Friday.
>>
>> --
>> Cheers,
>> Justin W. Flory
>> jflory7 at gmail.com <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','jflory7 at gmail.com');>
>>
>>
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