[Magazine] Article Edited and Ready for Final Review

[Justin W. Flory]

On 02/07/2016 07:25 PM, Neville A. Cross wrote:
> On Sun, February 7, 2016 4:17 pm, Justin W. Flory wrote:
>> On 02/07/2016 04:58 PM, charles profitt wrote:
>>
>>> I did not want to change the substance in the article written by
>>> William, but I think the language could be softened.
>>>
>>>
>>> ---- current ----
>>> Neville has a love-hate relationship with GNOME. All of his computers
>>> have it. The hate part comes from the changing nature of GNOME. The
>>> developers move functionality and do not do a good job of documenting
>>> where that feature went. Cross makes special note that the most annoying
>>> item is the “connect to server” function in Nautilus ----
>>>
>>>
>>> ---- possible revision ----
>>> Neville has a love-hate relationship with GNOME. While all of his
>>> computer run Ghome there are times when his productivity is impacted due
>>> to changes in where features are located. One example is the connect to
>>> server function in Nautilus. Neville believes that the issue could
>>> easily be resolved with better documentation with regards to changes.
>>> ----
>>>
>>>
>>> I think this keeps the substance roughly the same, but makes the
>>> message a bit more subtle.
>>>
>>> Thoughts?
>>>
>>
>> I'm personally +1 to this proposed revision. I think this is a better
>> compromise while still maintaining the original point intended by Neville.
>>
>>
>> Let's see if this sounds okay to Neville.
>>
>
> I am in a rural area with bad coverage and even worse data on my cell.
> 
> I keep using gnome because is what Fedora has as primary focus. As
> ambassador I represent fedora and therefore I need to be able to talk to
> people about gnome and show that it comes fluid, I am not guessing. Now is
> workstation and I feel that is it expected to endorse it as ambassador.
> Specially when everybody else in the local community is ditching gnome for
> various different reasons.
> 
> So, if you want to scratch all that and just write that I use wirkstation,
> it if fine by me.
> 
> The rewording is very good. If you want to keep some of the balanced view,
> I think it is very diplomatic.
> 
> Thanks for reviewing my interview.
> 
> Neville

Thanks for chiming in Neville -- with the above in mind, I believe using
Charles' revision will be best.

--
Cheers,
Justin W. Flory
jflory7 at gmail.com

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