[Magazine] Article Edited and Ready for Final Review

[Sylvia Sánchez]

Yep. Agree.

On Sunday, 7 February 2016, Justin W. Flory <jflory7 at gmail.com> wrote:

> On 02/07/2016 07:25 PM, Neville A. Cross wrote:
> > On Sun, February 7, 2016 4:17 pm, Justin W. Flory wrote:
> >> On 02/07/2016 04:58 PM, charles profitt wrote:
> >>
> >>> I did not want to change the substance in the article written by
> >>> William, but I think the language could be softened.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> ---- current ----
> >>> Neville has a love-hate relationship with GNOME. All of his computers
> >>> have it. The hate part comes from the changing nature of GNOME. The
> >>> developers move functionality and do not do a good job of documenting
> >>> where that feature went. Cross makes special note that the most
> annoying
> >>> item is the “connect to server† function in Nautilus ----
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> ---- possible revision ----
> >>> Neville has a love-hate relationship with GNOME. While all of his
> >>> computer run Ghome there are times when his productivity is impacted
> due
> >>> to changes in where features are located. One example is the connect to
> >>> server function in Nautilus. Neville believes that the issue could
> >>> easily be resolved with better documentation with regards to changes.
> >>> ----
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> I think this keeps the substance roughly the same, but makes the
> >>> message a bit more subtle.
> >>>
> >>> Thoughts?
> >>>
> >>
> >> I'm personally +1 to this proposed revision. I think this is a better
> >> compromise while still maintaining the original point intended by
> Neville.
> >>
> >>
> >> Let's see if this sounds okay to Neville.
> >>
> >
> > I am in a rural area with bad coverage and even worse data on my cell.
> >
> > I keep using gnome because is what Fedora has as primary focus. As
> > ambassador I represent fedora and therefore I need to be able to talk to
> > people about gnome and show that it comes fluid, I am not guessing. Now
> is
> > workstation and I feel that is it expected to endorse it as ambassador.
> > Specially when everybody else in the local community is ditching gnome
> for
> > various different reasons.
> >
> > So, if you want to scratch all that and just write that I use
> wirkstation,
> > it if fine by me.
> >
> > The rewording is very good. If you want to keep some of the balanced
> view,
> > I think it is very diplomatic.
> >
> > Thanks for reviewing my interview.
> >
> > Neville
>
> Thanks for chiming in Neville -- with the above in mind, I believe using
> Charles' revision will be best.
>
> --
> Cheers,
> Justin W. Flory
> jflory7 at gmail.com <javascript:;>
>
>
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