web/html/Contribute index.php,1.2,1.3

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/fedora/web/html/Contribute
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv29105/html/Contribute

Modified Files:
	index.php 
Log Message:
I did a fair job of going over each page and checking each link; tried to fix as many problems as I could, with an emphasis on no-errors and error-free content.  I fixed the side navigation to be have links to modern content; updated links; one redirect, more to come?; grammar and technical edits; misc and more.  Let's tag this live tomorrow, Tue. 6 December 2005 15:00 UTC or thereabouts, and I'll be around all day to fix any problems that come up.


Index: index.php
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RCS file: /cvs/fedora/web/html/Contribute/index.php,v
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 <h2>Fedora Ambassadors Project</h2>
 
 <p>
-  Fedora Ambassadors are enthusiasts who spread the word about Fedora, Linux, and Open Source to the wider public.  Ambassadors represent Fedora at events worldwide, and also act as Fedora experts in their own communities.  The Fedora Project will support Ambassadors with business cards, trade show kits, presentation materials and other resources.
+  Fedora Ambassadors are enthusiasts who spread the word about Fedora, Linux, and free/libre open source software (FLOSS) to the wider public.  Ambassadors represent Fedora at events worldwide, and also act as Fedora experts in their own communities.  The Fedora Project supports Ambassadors with business cards, trade show kits, presentation materials, collaboration with other Ambassadors, and other resources.
 </p>
 
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