[usbredir] improve grammar in SPEC file

Hans de Goede jwrdegoede at fedoraproject.org
Mon Mar 12 15:40:33 UTC 2012


commit f17ebab1b8d0fc6e9773dc37896d65fc65b2fd96
Author: Hans de Goede <hdegoede at redhat.com>
Date:   Mon Mar 12 16:41:52 2012 +0100

    improve grammar in SPEC file

 usbredir.spec |   14 ++++++--------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/usbredir.spec b/usbredir.spec
index bd4aeca..ed7c405 100644
--- a/usbredir.spec
+++ b/usbredir.spec
@@ -9,17 +9,15 @@ Source0:        http://spice-space.org/download/%{name}/%{name}-%{version}.tar.b
 BuildRequires:  libusb1-devel >= 1.0.9
 
 %description
-usbredir is a protocol for redirection USB traffic from a single USB device,
-to a different (virtual) machine then the one to which the USB device is
-attached. This package contains a number of libraries to help implementing
-support for usbredir:
+The usbredir libraries allow USB devices to be used on remote and/or virtual
+hosts over TCP.  The following libraries are provided:
 
 usbredirparser:
 A library containing the parser for the usbredir protocol
 
 usbredirhost:
-A library implementing the usb-host side of a usbredir connection.
-All that an application wishing to implement an usb-host needs to do is:
+A library implementing the USB host side of a usbredir connection.
+All that an application wishing to implement a USB host needs to do is:
 * Provide a libusb device handle for the device
 * Provide write and read callbacks for the actual transport of usbredir data
 * Monitor for usbredir and libusb read/write events and call their handlers
@@ -36,13 +34,13 @@ developing applications that use %{name}.
 
 
 %package        server
-Summary:        Simple usb-host tcp server
+Summary:        Simple USB host TCP server
 Group:          System Environment/Daemons
 License:        GPLv2+
 Requires:       %{name}%{?_isa} = %{version}-%{release}
 
 %description    server
-A simple usb-host tcp server, using libusbredirhost.
+A simple USB host TCP server, using libusbredirhost.
 
 
 %prep


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