Final release announcement coordination

[Joe Brockmeier]

On 12/02/2014 10:49 AM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> As you guys are crafting improved notes, for better consistency, it
> would be great to write in present tense about the release.
> 
>   INCONSISTENT: "Fedora 21 Foobar will include special flavor crystals
>   that defy gravity and help you fly like Superman."
> 
>   CONSISTENT: "Fedora 21 Foobar includes special flavor crystals that
>   defy gravity and help you fly like Superman."

Be sure to use passive voice too. Paul likes that.[1]

Best,

jzb

[1] May not be entirely true. Consult your attorney. Offer not valid in
Utah.
-- 
Joe Brockmeier | Principal Cloud & Storage Analyst
jzb at redhat.com | http://community.redhat.com/
Twitter: @jzb  | http://dissociatedpress.net/

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