Talking Points for Fedora Server 21

[Stephen Gallagher]

On Wed, 2014-11-26 at 23:04 +0700, Truong Anh. Tuan wrote:
> I am writing a series of Talking Points for Ambassadors to talk about
> Fedora Server 21 during upcoming events.
> 
> Please check out the very first draft here:
> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_21_talking_points#Fedora_Server
> 
> All ideas and comments are welcome.

Sorry for the long turnaround on this, it's been a busy week.

The content looks good to me, but I think we want to stick with present
or past tense. Not "A new D-BUS service will be made available", but
"Fedora Server offers a new D-BUS service", etc.

Otherwise, great work, thanks!
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